Peter Wannemacher <pe...@scriptureoftheweek.com> writes: > Request for feedback on 'lobbying' paper > From: Urs Liska > Subject: Request for feedback on 'lobbying' paper > Date: Fri, 19 Apr 2013 23:17:08 +0200 > User-agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux i686; rv:17.0) Gecko/20130329 > Thunderbird/17.0.5 > > Hi, > > I like the tone of the paper, but I think it might be a bit long. > > I have some grammatical observations below. I will make more if they > are helpful. > > > > ====================== > You wrote on page 4: > Editor independent > There isn’t a inseparable unit between editing and processing a docu- > > It is common to write: > There isn't an inseparable unit
And not "between" but rather "of editing and processing". > ======================== > In-place comments > Practically all plain text formats allow to enter comments inside the > > > I would write: > Practically all plain text formats allow you to enter comments inside the > or > Practically all plain text formats allow one to enter comments inside the > or > Practically all plain text formats allow the user to enter comments > inside the ... allow entering comments ... ... admit comments inside of ... -- David Kastrup _______________________________________________ lilypond-user mailing list lilypond-user@gnu.org https://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-user
