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Description:
Web:Introduction: Rename "Our Goal" box
The content of this box was somewhat confusing and inconsistent. See
http://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/lilypond-devel/2014-01/msg00011.html
This commit tries to incorporate the suggestions made in this thread
as far as I considered appropriate.
Please review this at https://codereview.appspot.com/48430043/
Affected files (+9, -5 lines):
M Documentation/web/introduction.itexi
Index: Documentation/web/introduction.itexi
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--- a/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi
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@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
@unnumbered Introduction
@divClass{column-center-top}
-@subheading Our Goal
+@subheading Our Mission
@imageFloat{flat-design,png,right}
@@ -20,10 +20,14 @@ soulless look of computer-printed sheet music.
Musicians prefer
reading beautiful music, so why couldn't programmers write
software to produce elegant printed parts?
-The result is a system which frees musicians from the details of
-layout, allowing them to focus on making music. LilyPond works
-with them to create publication-quality parts, crafted in the best
-traditions of classical music engraving.
+The result is a program that creates beautiful sheet music
+following the best traditions of classical music engraving.
+It takes care of the details of layout programmatically,
+allowing composers, transcribers and publishers to focus
+on the @emph{music} instead of improving their software's
+default output. Performers will get parts that let them
+concentrate on @emph{playing} music instead of @emph{reading} it.
+
@divEnd
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