Thank you, Yoav, I will have it fixed, listen to this channel for other suggestions and have the revised version submitted by Mar 8th.
Sean In your mail: >From: Yoav Nir <y...@checkpoint.com> >Reply-To: >To: "'Paul Hoffman'" <paul.hoff...@vpnc.org>, IPsecme WG <ipsec@ietf.org> >Subject: Re: [IPsec] Please review draft-ietf-ipsecme-aes-ctr-ikev2-05.txt >Date:Thu, 4 Mar 2010 07:16:55 +0200 > >Paragraph 5 of section #2: > MUST accept any length that results in proper alignment. It should > be noticed that the ESP [RFC4303] Encrypted Payload requires > > Please change "noticed" to "noted". > > Other than that, the document looks good enough for implementation. > > >A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts >>directories. >>This draft is a work item of the IP Security Maintenance and Extensions >>Working Group of the IETF. >> >> Title : Using Advanced Encryption Standard (AES) Counter Mode >> with IKEv2 >> Author(s) : S. Shen, Y. Mao, S. murthy >> Filename : draft-ietf-ipsecme-aes-ctr-ikev2-05.txt >> Pages : 10 >> Date : 2010-3-2 >> >>This document describes the usage of Advanced Encryption Standard >> Counter Mode (AES-CTR), with an explicit initialization vector, by >> IKEv2 for encrypting the IKEv2 exchanges that follow the IKE_SA_INIT >> exchange. >> >>A URL for this Internet-Draft is: >>http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ipsecme-aes-ctr-ikev2-05.txt > >Based on Pasi's AD review, the authors significantly shortened the document. It seems prudent to have the WG review the new, shorter version. In particular, it would be good for developers to look at the new short document and see if it is complete enough to implement from. > >This review cycle will end in a week, but please do the review early in case problems are found. > >--Paul Hoffman, Director >--VPN Consortium >_______________________________________________ >IPsec mailing list >IPsec@ietf.org >https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipsec > >Scanned by Check Point Total Security Gateway. >_______________________________________________ >IPsec mailing list >IPsec@ietf.org >https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipsec _______________________________________________ IPsec mailing list IPsec@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipsec
