Hi Sean, Section 5. IANA Considerations can be reworded in-line with ikev2bis.
5. IANA Considerations IANA has already registered the type and value for AES-CTR. Name Number Defined In -------------------------------------------- ENCR_AES_CTR 13 (RFC3686 <http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc3686>) Best regards, Raj On Thu, Mar 4, 2010 at 11:19 AM, Sean Shen <shens...@cnnic.cn> wrote: > Thank you, Yoav, > I will have it fixed, listen to this channel for other suggestions and have > the > revised version submitted by Mar 8th. > > Sean > > > In your mail: > >From: Yoav Nir <y...@checkpoint.com> > >Reply-To: > >To: "'Paul Hoffman'" <paul.hoff...@vpnc.org>, IPsecme WG <ipsec@ietf.org> > >Subject: Re: [IPsec] Please review draft-ietf-ipsecme-aes-ctr-ikev2-05.txt > >Date:Thu, 4 Mar 2010 07:16:55 +0200 > > > >Paragraph 5 of section #2: > > MUST accept any length that results in proper alignment. It should > > be noticed that the ESP [RFC4303] Encrypted Payload requires > > > > Please change "noticed" to "noted". > > > > Other than that, the document looks good enough for implementation. > > > > >A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > >>directories. > >>This draft is a work item of the IP Security Maintenance and Extensions > Working > Group of the IETF. > >> > >> Title : Using Advanced Encryption Standard (AES) Counter > Mode with IKEv2 > >> Author(s) : S. Shen, Y. Mao, S. murthy > >> Filename : draft-ietf-ipsecme-aes-ctr-ikev2-05.txt > >> Pages : 10 > >> Date : 2010-3-2 > >> > >>This document describes the usage of Advanced Encryption Standard > >> Counter Mode (AES-CTR), with an explicit initialization vector, by > >> IKEv2 for encrypting the IKEv2 exchanges that follow the IKE_SA_INIT > >> exchange. > >> > >>A URL for this Internet-Draft is: > >> > http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ipsecme-aes-ctr-ikev2-05.txt > > > >Based on Pasi's AD review, the authors significantly shortened the > document. It > seems prudent to have the WG review the new, shorter version. In > particular, it > would be good for developers to look at the new short document and see if > it is > complete enough to implement from. > > > >This review cycle will end in a week, but please do the review early in > case > problems are found. > > > >--Paul Hoffman, Director > >--VPN Consortium > >_______________________________________________ > >IPsec mailing list > >IPsec@ietf.org > >https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipsec > > > >Scanned by Check Point Total Security Gateway. > >_______________________________________________ > >IPsec mailing list > >IPsec@ietf.org > >https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipsec > > > > _______________________________________________ > IPsec mailing list > IPsec@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipsec >
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