On Mon, Nov 21, 2011 at 4:38 PM, sebb <seb...@gmail.com> wrote: > Currently it reads: > > "drive the process of incubation forwards which finally leads to an > acceptance vote" > > The problem is that "process of incubation" can mean more than just > entering the Incubator, and "acceptance" could refer to graduation. > > How about: > > "drive the process of entering the Incubator, leading to a vote to > accept the proposed podling" > > Not perfect, but also not ambiguous, I hope?
Your version reads better imho -- http://www.grobmeier.de https://www.timeandbill.de --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: general-unsubscr...@incubator.apache.org For additional commands, e-mail: general-h...@incubator.apache.org
