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Document: draft-ietf-nmop-terminology-07
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2025-02-01
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Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
be fixed before publication.
The changes since -07 have resolved all of my concerns on that version.
I find the document much clearer.
ISSUES: 0
NITS: 1
1) NIT: Inconsistency
In Figure 3, a Fault gives rise to an Alert, that gives rise to an Alarm.
In Figure 4, a Problem directly gives rise to an Alarm, with no
intermediary Alert.
Is this inconsistency intended? If so, it could be helpful to explain it.
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