Hi Behcet, Thanks for the review. I've uploaded version -24 to address your comments. Detailed answers below inline.
Thanks, Yingzhen On Wed, Jan 29, 2025 at 9:03 AM Behcet Sarikaya via Datatracker < nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. > > Document: draft-ietf-isis-sr-yang-23 > Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya > Review Date: 2025-01-29 > IETF LC End Date: 2025-01-30 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: > This document develops a YANG data module for the purpose of configuring > and > managing > > IS-IS segment routing in the MPLS data plane. As such a large part of it > consists of YANG code in Sections 3 and 4. > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > It has the following nits: > > idnits tool says there are 3 long (>72) lines. > [Yingzhen]: fixed. > > Appendix A has not been referenced. > [Yingzhen]: Appendix A just provides a configuration example as most YANG documents. I don't think it needs to be referenced. > > Spell out the acronyms like IS IS-IS, MPLS, etc. in first use. > [Yingzhen]: These terms are so well-known. I will leave these to the RFC editor to decide whether they need to be expanded.
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