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Document: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-13
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2017-12-01
IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-11
IESG Telechat date: TBD
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
be fixed before publication.
Disclaimer:
I conducted this review without any knowledge of YANG modeling. So the
sort of review I can do is superficial.
Issues:
Major: 0
Minor: 0
Nits: 2
(1) NIT: Section 1 - Language
s/example model is/an example model is/
s/full-blown OSPF model/a complete OSPF model/
s/augments general network/augments the general network/
(2) NIT: Section 4 - typo
Something is wrong with:
The YANG modules ietf-network and ietf-network are designed to be
used in conjunction with implementations that support the Network
Did you perhaps mean:
The YANG modules ietf-network and ietf-network-topology are ...
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