Hi, Thank you. Best, Meral
> -----Original Message----- > From: Tim Schaub [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Thursday, June 02, 2016 12:08 AM > To: Meral Shirazipour > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: Re: Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-geojson-03 > > Thanks for the comments Meral. I've proposed > https://github.com/geojson/draft-geojson/pull/208 to incorporate them. > Responses below ... > > On Wed, Jun 1, 2016 at 3:51 PM, Meral Shirazipour > <[email protected]> wrote: > > ... > > > -[Page 3], "any thing"--typo-->"anything" > > I *think* the original text was meant to emphasize "thing", but it ends up > sounding awkward to me. I think we should go with "anything" > if others agree. > > > -[Page 4], KML not spelled out at first use (Keyhole Markup Language?) > > Done. > > > -[Page 11],PIDF-LO, please spell out at first use and maybe reference > > RFC5139. > > Done. But see below ... > > > -[Page 11], it says > > > > "Applications such as PIDF-LO that are sensitive to location > > > > uncertainty and confidence might treat ... > > > > " > > > > Not clear: if this is not an OK behavior, it should say "should not > > treat..."? If this is an ok behavior, maybe it should say "MAY treat ..." > > I agree that this paragraph might add confusion. I think the section on > Uncertainty and Confidence would be clearer if the whole paragraph were > removed. > > > -[Page 12], "in the the case"---typo-->"in the case" > > Good catch. There were three of these. > > > -[Page 12], "the OGC's "http://www.opengis.net/def/crs/OGC/1.3/CRS84"; > > [OGCURL]. " > > > > Should the URL be moved to reference section? > > Since http://www.opengis.net/def/crs/OGC/1.3/CRS84 is a URN, I don't think it > makes sense to include in the reference section. It would be nice if it > resolved to > something useful so it could serve as a reference though. > > > -[Page 13], "or to to have"--typo-->"or to have" > > Changed. > > > -[Page 16], "the the semantics"--typo-->"the semantics" > > Also changed. > > > -[Page 18], "can not be"---->"cannot be" > > Done. > > Tim > > > > > > > Best Regards, > > > > Meral > > > > --- > > > > Meral Shirazipour > > > > Ericsson Research > > > > www.ericsson.com _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
