thanks On 23 Nov 2015, at 00:18, Stefan Santesson <ste...@aaa-sec.com> wrote:
> Thank you, > > I have now seen this and I will address this in the final document update. > > /Stefan > > > > > On 20/11/15 02:12, "Jari Arkko" <jari.ar...@piuha.net> wrote: > >> Thanks for your review, Jouni! >> >> (Authors, did you see this review - wanted to make sure no information is >> lost.) >> >> Jari >> >> On 16 Oct 2015, at 01:56, jouni korhonen <jouni.nos...@gmail.com> wrote: >> >>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on >>> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at >>> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >>> >>> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments >>> you may receive. >>> >>> Document:draft-santesson-auth-context-extension-10 >>> Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen >>> Review Date: Oct-15-2015 >>> IETF LC End Date: Oct-27-2015 >>> IESG Telechat date: not yet >>> >>> >>> Summary: >>> -------- >>> >>> Ready for publication as an Informational RFC. >>> >>> Comments: >>> --------- >>> >>> I do not have deep expertise on the area this I-D covers. Having read it >>> through and knowing the solution is already deployed for few years I have >>> no technical comments. >>> >>> Minor issues/nits: >>> ------------------ >>> 1) IDNits result that need to be addressed: >>> ** The abstract seems to contain references ([RFC5280], [SAML]), which it >>> shouldn't. Please replace those with straight textual mentions of the >>> documents in question. >>> >>> 2) == Unused Reference: 'RFC5322' is defined on line 416, but no explicit >>> reference was found in the text >>> >>> >>> 3) Since this targets Informational RFC I wouldn't mind seeing all >>> references >>> except RFC2119 as informational references and not normative. We could >>> argue >>> whether RFC2119 language is needed at all (but no strong opinion here). >>> 4) Introduction third paragraph: >>> * expand SAML on the first occurrence >>> * I would welcome a reference for "SAML federation" >>> >>> 5) Introduction eight paragraph: >>> * expand CA on the first occurrence >>> 6) Section 3.1.2: >>> * expand OID on the first occurrence (now it comes after the paragraph >>> explaining "Ref") >>> * three times s/REF/Ref >>> _______________________________________________ >>> Gen-art mailing list >>> Gen-art@ietf.org >>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art >> >
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