Thanks for your review, Jouni! (Authors, did you see this review - wanted to make sure no information is lost.)
Jari On 16 Oct 2015, at 01:56, jouni korhonen <jouni.nos...@gmail.com> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Document:draft-santesson-auth-context-extension-10 > Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen > Review Date: Oct-15-2015 > IETF LC End Date: Oct-27-2015 > IESG Telechat date: not yet > > > Summary: > -------- > > Ready for publication as an Informational RFC. > > Comments: > --------- > > I do not have deep expertise on the area this I-D covers. Having read it > through and knowing the solution is already deployed for few years I have no > technical comments. > > Minor issues/nits: > ------------------ > 1) IDNits result that need to be addressed: > ** The abstract seems to contain references ([RFC5280], [SAML]), which it > shouldn't. Please replace those with straight textual mentions of the > documents in question. > > 2) == Unused Reference: 'RFC5322' is defined on line 416, but no explicit > reference was found in the text > > > 3) Since this targets Informational RFC I wouldn't mind seeing all references > except RFC2119 as informational references and not normative. We could > argue > whether RFC2119 language is needed at all (but no strong opinion here). > 4) Introduction third paragraph: > * expand SAML on the first occurrence > * I would welcome a reference for "SAML federation" > > 5) Introduction eight paragraph: > * expand CA on the first occurrence > 6) Section 3.1.2: > * expand OID on the first occurrence (now it comes after the paragraph > explaining "Ref") > * three times s/REF/Ref > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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