Thank you, I have now seen this and I will address this in the final document update.
/Stefan On 20/11/15 02:12, "Jari Arkko" <jari.ar...@piuha.net> wrote: >Thanks for your review, Jouni! > >(Authors, did you see this review - wanted to make sure no information is >lost.) > >Jari > >On 16 Oct 2015, at 01:56, jouni korhonen <jouni.nos...@gmail.com> wrote: > >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on >> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at >> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments >> you may receive. >> >> Document:draft-santesson-auth-context-extension-10 >> Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen >> Review Date: Oct-15-2015 >> IETF LC End Date: Oct-27-2015 >> IESG Telechat date: not yet >> >> >> Summary: >> -------- >> >> Ready for publication as an Informational RFC. >> >> Comments: >> --------- >> >> I do not have deep expertise on the area this I-D covers. Having read it >> through and knowing the solution is already deployed for few years I have no >> technical comments. >> >> Minor issues/nits: >> ------------------ >> 1) IDNits result that need to be addressed: >> ** The abstract seems to contain references ([RFC5280], [SAML]), which it >> shouldn't. Please replace those with straight textual mentions of the >> documents in question. >> >> 2) == Unused Reference: 'RFC5322' is defined on line 416, but no explicit >> reference was found in the text >> >> >> 3) Since this targets Informational RFC I wouldn't mind seeing all references >> except RFC2119 as informational references and not normative. We could >> argue >> whether RFC2119 language is needed at all (but no strong opinion here). >> 4) Introduction third paragraph: >> * expand SAML on the first occurrence >> * I would welcome a reference for "SAML federation" >> >> 5) Introduction eight paragraph: >> * expand CA on the first occurrence >> 6) Section 3.1.2: >> * expand OID on the first occurrence (now it comes after the paragraph >> explaining "Ref") >> * three times s/REF/Ref >> _______________________________________________ >> Gen-art mailing list >> Gen-art@ietf.org >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
