I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-appsawg-http-forwarded-06 Reviewer: Peter McCann Review Date: 2012-07-23 IETF LC End Date: 2012-07-23 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Minor nits Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Section 4: any proxy in the chain may ignore to update SHOULD BE: any proxy in the chain may ignore and not update The header field can be defined in augmented BNF syntax as: SHOULD BE: The header field value can be defined in augmented BNF syntax as: A proxy server that wants to add a new Forwarded header field can either append it to the existing Forwarded header field or as a new field at the end of the header block. SHOULD BE: A proxy server that wants to add a new Forwarded header field value can either append it to the last existing Forwarded header field after a comma separator or as a new field at the end of the header block. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
