On Tue, 24 Jul 2012 01:10:56 +0200, Pete McCann <[email protected]> wrote:
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft.
Hello.
Section 4:
any proxy in the chain may ignore to update
SHOULD BE:
any proxy in the chain may ignore and not update
The header field can be
defined in augmented BNF syntax as:
SHOULD BE:
The header field value can be
defined in augmented BNF syntax as:
A proxy server that wants to add a new Forwarded header field can
either append it to the existing Forwarded header field or as a new
field at the end of the header block.
SHOULD BE:
A proxy server that wants to add a new Forwarded header field value
can
either append it to the last existing Forwarded header field after
a comma separator or as a new
field at the end of the header block.
These changes look good.
/Martin Nilsson
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