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Document: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-pdv-03.txt
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 23 July 2012
IETF LC End Date: 23 July 2012
IESG Telechat date: N/A
Summary: Almost Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues:
In Section 4:
pdvtype = "pdv=" 0 ; MAPDV2 ITU-T G.1020
/ 1 ; 2-point PDV ITU-T Y.1540
Firstly, I think you meant "0" and "1" above (you are missing quotes).
Secondly, this doesn't allow for future pdvtype registrations, so you
should be using something like 1*2DIGIT here (with a comment that value
0-15 are valid), or something more specific.
The document creates a new registry with "Specification Required", yet
the shepherding write-up says that the document doesn't create any
registry with Expert Review (question 18). So one of the two is
incorrect, I don't know which one.
Nits/editorial comments: None
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