Hi Vijay We will clear this nit
Thanks a lot for this review JL > -----Message d'origine----- > De : Vijay K. Gurbani [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] > Envoyé : mardi 2 octobre 2007 22:42 > À : LE ROUX Jean-Louis RD-CORE-LAN; [EMAIL PROTECTED]; > [EMAIL PROTECTED]; [EMAIL PROTECTED] > Cc : General Area Review Team; [EMAIL PROTECTED]; Ross Callon > Objet : [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of > draft-ietf-pce-disco-proto-isis-08.txt > > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team > (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, > please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). > > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD > before posting a new version of the draft. > > Document: draft-ietf-pce-disco-proto-isis-08.txt > Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani > Review Date: 2 Oct 2007 > IESG Telechat date: 4 Oct 2007 > > Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. > > One nit: > > - S2, towards the end of page 4: > s/([IS-IS-CAP])/[IS-IS-CAP]/ > that is, any special reason to put the reference in brackets? > If not, simply remove the brackets for readability. > > Thanks. > > - vijay > -- > Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent > 2701 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9F-546, Lisle, Illinois 60532 (USA) > Email: [EMAIL PROTECTED],bell-labs.com,acm.org} > WWW: http://www.alcatel-lucent.com/bell-labs > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
