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Document: draft-ietf-pce-disco-proto-isis-08.txt
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 2 Oct 2007
IESG Telechat date: 4 Oct 2007
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.
One nit:
- S2, towards the end of page 4:
s/([IS-IS-CAP])/[IS-IS-CAP]/
that is, any special reason to put the reference in brackets?
If not, simply remove the brackets for readability.
Thanks.
- vijay
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