On Thu, 2012-05-31 at 05:46 -0700, Warren Block wrote: > On Wed, 30 May 2012, Sean Bruno wrote: > > > Was trolling around inside of bce(4) and the Broadcom docs today and > > made the following update to the man page. Thoughts? > > > > Sean > > > > http://people.freebsd.org/~sbruno/bce_man.txt > > Nice! > > Just minor suggestions. > > The two "whether or not" sentences ought to be just "Enable/Disable ..." > like the rest. > > A couple of "Cannot be assigned the value 0" sentences can be simpler as > "Cannot be set to 0" if that doesn't change the meaning. > > "Valid values are in the range from 0-256." can be simpler as > "Values from 0-256 are valid." > > Many "The default value is" which could be simplified to "The default > is", or added to the end of a previous sentence as an aside: > "Values from 0-100 are valid (default 18)."
Indeed. Much more gooder wordingness. Updated! http://people.freebsd.org/~sbruno/bce_man.txt Sean _______________________________________________ freebsd-net@freebsd.org mailing list http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/freebsd-net To unsubscribe, send any mail to "freebsd-net-unsubscr...@freebsd.org"
