On Wed, 30 May 2012, Sean Bruno wrote:
Was trolling around inside of bce(4) and the Broadcom docs today and
made the following update to the man page. Thoughts?
Sean
http://people.freebsd.org/~sbruno/bce_man.txt
Nice!
Just minor suggestions.
The two "whether or not" sentences ought to be just "Enable/Disable ..."
like the rest.
A couple of "Cannot be assigned the value 0" sentences can be simpler as
"Cannot be set to 0" if that doesn't change the meaning.
"Valid values are in the range from 0-256." can be simpler as
"Values from 0-256 are valid."
Many "The default value is" which could be simplified to "The default
is", or added to the end of a previous sentence as an aside:
"Values from 0-100 are valid (default 18)."
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