Hi Allan, I realised that after sending that, and saw that there were recent activities, however I was stills seeing the same thing. I literally just learned “git pull” a few minutes ago :)
That said, everything looks good! Just saw one that needs to be corrected; the word “organising” in the second paragraph of the main page. Sorry for the confusion. adelia > On 12 Mar 2016, at 9:43 AM, Allan Day <a...@gnome.org> wrote: > > Hi Adelia, > > Thanks for this! > > Adelia Rahim <adeliara...@gmail.com> wrote: >> Other than to standardise/standardize spellings to UK/US English ... > > Please let me know if you see any British English spellings in there. > I try to avoid them, but sometimes they slip in. > >> - Under Wayland, second sentence “Wayland is also enables…" > > I can't find that - maybe it's fixed already... > >> - In general to standardise usage of the word app and applications > > We've always used "application" in GNOME, so I tend to try and stick > with that. I've converted the two "app"s that I could find. Yell if > you see any others. > >> - Under Polari, first sentence of second paragraph, "… as have server >> settings" > > The sentence reads OK to me. Am I missing something? > >> - Under Maps, point #3, “This has been expanded for 3.20, with the addition >> of printing for directions can be printed”. And also whether it is "print >> outs" or “printouts" > > I don't see either of these issues in the current draft. Maybe you > need to update the repository... > > Thanks again, > > Allan _______________________________________________ engagement-list mailing list engagement-list@gnome.org https://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/engagement-list
