Thanks for the reviews so far! There are some missing sections in the "Other Improvements" page (file name is more.page), but the text that is there is more or less finalised, so it would be helpful to have reviews for that page.
Feel free to comment on content, style and organisation as well as language! We can still make changes. Allan On Fri, Mar 11, 2016 at 4:53 PM irfan...@yahoo.com <irfan...@yahoo.com> wrote: > Hi, > > > I haven't find any mistakes while reviewing the index page and it'seems > perfect and I guess it's good to go but I'd appericiate if you also > consider one or more reviews. > > > Goodluck with the rest of the release notes. > > > Best, > > Irfan > > ------ Original message------ > > *From: *Allan Day > > *Date: *Fri, Mar 11, 2016 8:25 PM > > *To: *engagement-list; > > *Subject:*3.20 release notes proofreading > Hi everyone, > > We are really short on time for the release notes, and they need to be > completed ASAP. As a result, I'm trying to finalise each page in sequence, > so it can be proof read while the next pages are being written up. > > The first page (called index.page) is ready for proof reading. If anyone > can review it and give feedback, that would be great. As usual, the notes > can be found here: > > https://git.gnome.org/browse/release-notes/ > > You'll need the gnome-3-20 branch: > > https://git.gnome.org/browse/release-notes/log/?h=gnome-3-20 > > Many thanks to Adelia for helping out with the release notes - we'd be > further behind than we already are without her! > > Allan >
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