Hi Allan, Other than to standardise/standardize spellings to UK/US English, here are a few things I picked up:
- Under Wayland, second sentence “Wayland is also enables…" - In general to standardise usage of the word app and applications - Under Polari, first sentence of second paragraph, "… as have server settings" - Under Maps, point #3, “This has been expanded for 3.20, with the addition of printing for directions can be printed”. And also whether it is "print outs" or “printouts" adelia > On 11 Mar 2016, at 12:07 PM, Allan Day <a...@gnome.org> wrote: > > Thanks for the reviews so far! There are some missing sections in the "Other > Improvements" page (file name is more.page), but the text that is there is > more or less finalised, so it would be helpful to have reviews for that page. > > Feel free to comment on content, style and organisation as well as language! > We can still make changes. > > Allan > > On Fri, Mar 11, 2016 at 4:53 PM irfan...@yahoo.com > <mailto:irfan...@yahoo.com> <irfan...@yahoo.com <mailto:irfan...@yahoo.com>> > wrote: > Hi, > > I haven't find any mistakes while reviewing the index page and it'seems > perfect and I guess it's good to go but I'd appericiate if you also consider > one or more reviews. > > Goodluck with the rest of the release notes. > > Best, > Irfan > ------ Original message------ > From: Allan Day > Date: Fri, Mar 11, 2016 8:25 PM > To: engagement-list; > Subject:3.20 release notes proofreading > Hi everyone, > > We are really short on time for the release notes, and they need to be > completed ASAP. As a result, I'm trying to finalise each page in sequence, so > it can be proof read while the next pages are being written up. > > The first page (called index.pa <http://index.pa/>ge) is ready for proof > reading. If anyone can review it and give feedback, that would be great. As > usual, the notes can be found here: > > https://git.gnome.org/browse/release-notes/ > <https://git.gnome.org/browse/release-notes/> > > You'll need the gnome-3-20 branch: > > https://git.gnome.org/browse/release-notes/log/?h=gnome-3-20 > <https://git.gnome.org/browse/release-notes/log/?h=gnome-3-20> > > Many thanks to Adelia for helping out with the release notes - we'd be > further behind than we already are without her! > > Allan > _______________________________________________ > engagement-list mailing list > engagement-list@gnome.org > https://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/engagement-list
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