Moin,
that terminology is mostly borrowed from the IPv6 DNS paper, which used
that terminology.

I think that this should be a relatively easy thing to adjust.

Just as a general thing in addition, though: The in-domain/.../...
terminology, is it already 'stable' enough to also sed
s/bailiwick/new_term/ in (not related to draft-momoka-dnsop-3901bis-00)
papers that are being written?

(Granted, for academic papers it will probably need another decade
until one can then do without a footnote on the first use of in-domain
before one can be sure no reviewer will complain. ;))

With best regards,
Tobias


On Tue, 2023-10-31 at 20:34 +0000, Wessels, Duane wrote:
> Hi Momoka,
> 
> I see that your draft often uses “in-bailiwick” or “out-of-
> bailiwick”.  If you are not already aware, the latest version of the
> DNS terminology document (draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8499bis) notes that
> “bailiwick” should be considered historic at this point.  The
> preferred language is to refer to the relationship between the NS
> record owner name, the name in the NS RDATA and the zone origin as
> either in-domain, sibling domain, or unrelated.
> 
> DW
> 
> From: DNSOP <dnsop-boun...@ietf.org> on behalf of Momoka Yamamoto
> <momoka....@gmail.com>
> Date: Sunday, October 22, 2023 at 11:13 AM
> To: dnsop <dnsop@ietf.org>
> Cc: "tfie...@mpi-inf.mpg.de" <tfie...@mpi-inf.mpg.de>
> Subject: [EXTERNAL] [DNSOP] DNS IPv6 Transport Operational Guidelines
> (draft-momoka-dnsop-3901bis-00)
> 
> 
> Caution: This email originated from outside the organization. Do not
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> 
> Hello DNSOP Working Group,
> 
> My name is Momoka Yamamoto and I've recently submitted an Internet-
> Draft titled "DNS IPv6 Transport Operational Guidelines" (draft-
> momoka-dnsop-3901bis-00) with my co-author Tobias
> tfie...@mpi-inf.mpg.de<mailto:tfie...@mpi-inf.mpg.de>. This draft
> discusses the operational guidelines for operating authoritative and
> recursive DNS servers in mixed IPv4 and IPv6 environments, expanding
> on RFC3910 to address the progressing IPv4 exhaustion and the long-
> term necessity of IPv6-only resolvers.
> 
> I would greatly appreciate any feedback, comments, or questions you
> may have regarding this draft. I believe this document could
> contribute significantly to the current discussions and work of the
> DNSOP working group, especially in light of the wide adoption of IPv6
> over the last 20 years since BCP91 was written.
> 
> The draft is open for discussion and I am looking forward to engaging
> with the community to refine and improve it.
> Momoka Y
> 
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> Date: Mon, Oct 23, 2023 at 3:02 AM
> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-momoka-dnsop-3901bis-
> 00.txt
> To: Momoka Yamamoto
> <momoka....@gmail.com<mailto:momoka....@gmail.com>>, Tobias Fiebig
> <tfie...@mpi-inf.mpg.de<mailto:tfie...@mpi-inf.mpg.de>>
> 
> 
> A new version of Internet-Draft draft-momoka-dnsop-3901bis-00.txt has
> been
> successfully submitted by Momoka Yamamoto and posted to the
> IETF repository.
> 
> Name:     draft-momoka-dnsop-3901bis
> Revision: 00
> Title:    DNS IPv6 Transport Operational Guidelines
> Date:     2023-10-20
> Group:    Individual Submission
> Pages:    9
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> Abstract:
> 
>    This memo provides guidelines and documents Best Current Practice
> for
>    operating authoritative and recursive DNS servers given that
> queries
>    and responses are carried in a mixed environment of IPv4 and IPv6
>    networks.  It expands beyond [RFC3910] in so far that it now
>    considers the reality of progressing IPv4 exhaustion, which will
> make
>    IPv6-only resolvers necessary in the long-term.
> 
> Discussion Venues
> 
>    This note is to be removed before publishing as an RFC.
> 
>    Source for this draft and an issue tracker can be found at
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> 
> 
> 
> The IETF Secretariat
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