Moin, that terminology is mostly borrowed from the IPv6 DNS paper, which used that terminology.
I think that this should be a relatively easy thing to adjust. Just as a general thing in addition, though: The in-domain/.../... terminology, is it already 'stable' enough to also sed s/bailiwick/new_term/ in (not related to draft-momoka-dnsop-3901bis-00) papers that are being written? (Granted, for academic papers it will probably need another decade until one can then do without a footnote on the first use of in-domain before one can be sure no reviewer will complain. ;)) With best regards, Tobias On Tue, 2023-10-31 at 20:34 +0000, Wessels, Duane wrote: > Hi Momoka, > > I see that your draft often uses “in-bailiwick” or “out-of- > bailiwick”. If you are not already aware, the latest version of the > DNS terminology document (draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8499bis) notes that > “bailiwick” should be considered historic at this point. The > preferred language is to refer to the relationship between the NS > record owner name, the name in the NS RDATA and the zone origin as > either in-domain, sibling domain, or unrelated. > > DW > > From: DNSOP <dnsop-boun...@ietf.org> on behalf of Momoka Yamamoto > <momoka....@gmail.com> > Date: Sunday, October 22, 2023 at 11:13 AM > To: dnsop <dnsop@ietf.org> > Cc: "tfie...@mpi-inf.mpg.de" <tfie...@mpi-inf.mpg.de> > Subject: [EXTERNAL] [DNSOP] DNS IPv6 Transport Operational Guidelines > (draft-momoka-dnsop-3901bis-00) > > > Caution: This email originated from outside the organization. Do not > click links or open attachments unless you recognize the sender and > know the content is safe. > > Hello DNSOP Working Group, > > My name is Momoka Yamamoto and I've recently submitted an Internet- > Draft titled "DNS IPv6 Transport Operational Guidelines" (draft- > momoka-dnsop-3901bis-00) with my co-author Tobias > tfie...@mpi-inf.mpg.de<mailto:tfie...@mpi-inf.mpg.de>. This draft > discusses the operational guidelines for operating authoritative and > recursive DNS servers in mixed IPv4 and IPv6 environments, expanding > on RFC3910 to address the progressing IPv4 exhaustion and the long- > term necessity of IPv6-only resolvers. > > I would greatly appreciate any feedback, comments, or questions you > may have regarding this draft. I believe this document could > contribute significantly to the current discussions and work of the > DNSOP working group, especially in light of the wide adoption of IPv6 > over the last 20 years since BCP91 was written. > > The draft is open for discussion and I am looking forward to engaging > with the community to refine and improve it. > Momoka Y > > ---------- Forwarded message --------- > From: <internet-dra...@ietf.org<mailto:internet-dra...@ietf.org>> > Date: Mon, Oct 23, 2023 at 3:02 AM > Subject: New Version Notification for draft-momoka-dnsop-3901bis- > 00.txt > To: Momoka Yamamoto > <momoka....@gmail.com<mailto:momoka....@gmail.com>>, Tobias Fiebig > <tfie...@mpi-inf.mpg.de<mailto:tfie...@mpi-inf.mpg.de>> > > > A new version of Internet-Draft draft-momoka-dnsop-3901bis-00.txt has > been > successfully submitted by Momoka Yamamoto and posted to the > IETF repository. > > Name: draft-momoka-dnsop-3901bis > Revision: 00 > Title: DNS IPv6 Transport Operational Guidelines > Date: 2023-10-20 > Group: Individual Submission > Pages: 9 > URL: > https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-momoka-dnsop-3901bis-00.txt< > https://secure-web.cisco.com/1WMEgDzNtGlz-wElmNGvqrbmvek1FrrN6hpGMOB0HXct2bWQ5eclrKy0sSIyIr5fLwn6G01cug4fyXmPexGcsF_Rm7MxHq-o4tzGHqTD7ouDAStpXu-iTFhj6vNiP-y72QytHuNUN8-mRdIE627xDmmTeLH70xmrdtVJOJM72rt2cel_2rv4oWPKq7XFhZD97AXiaDGmFb9sclX1jT2HmV9tQkZdajVGVKjx9AKzbz62xeB7aDswlmqzyRMqicGDCNK3PZykqbfURaN59egG4khPzqkhhRsLPw1-3lRRvIPo/https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Farchive%2Fid%2Fdraft-momoka-dnsop-3901bis-00.txt > > > Status: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-momoka-dnsop-3901bis/< > https://secure-web.cisco.com/1CYQ6wghi7KM-lLwdkZhqWYxjiLmNA48h8ly5C8ug2j2BRQiX4hRBw5xnCH6mRDgZHjJrlMomQQ2S6YGgkoLYYMcXlFQAGFy1-y-KcKNnU7DZxu8CAS7kAHc5o_Q6hzcF8b-YJu283kAGkb85XcLDeTGZzsEtDAhXEzhwgyEapiKdPxAZRgvF7LSOum2pwWGgZhqUqg0vZY0SrPO4YLTwc_jBcNl4tSTYwXJsH2F2FmeoFttb29_ZCxktCWwkbGf4yoWzpRa2y5B95jH7frwWvn6s8-VNLBAt4fN87P8c_dA/https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-momoka-dnsop-3901bis%2F > > > HTML: > https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-momoka-dnsop-3901bis-00.html< > https://secure-web.cisco.com/1_MVcKP9IPgG_TWZ8qWPF45uedr1VX_eQbY6J0uOVr7WF0yJQ0-jwq-JpIh6iUJKEcIOKtkLpzNBwhqCZqk3g6DvlJpXf7rlPt4axLpZKJnmFtE2zgyTxPp3yA8qRpo7shv8c6oCcT5uSP3RyXQL1UWO6g5JMsOAV_DDKdoocshQHR_sQIczmwXn40eTb83rqvxIu5VKHlnlP1SosSspjjA0fCRKEPry43mOJQMRuvxiEMbINg-8NEmF2IaVIeQIobePMvxnOWJm__TpO4Rp30McJ3PHjuAhk61EdgXzQDHQ/https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Farchive%2Fid%2Fdraft-momoka-dnsop-3901bis-00.html > > > HTMLized: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-momoka-dnsop-3901bis< > https://secure-web.cisco.com/1bhZB-VPC1HybZX0MBp43vTwsOSVOFUfbRDxDSwy38R3GC5iA-S6Dy9neUilft0xHI4LwQmry3dfa46A8dCVqseh8yCwaxbIXChgZISaHzhBCXvFe2Q7X7BjAeL4PMJQ_r50vTr1fYKrqBTTk37sXMW-AgbwkZsiNA5E55yUyYQdULPvpkAT1hlVfFVBfhrgbLoV8pyVjSSMhkZkScQZ3-4gZ27MuTdOcszkRzTrkjgCrTWZXoS8XJSLdgf4DC8wv_3QLP2rKq0W36rzJl3UGLm0pJRhk2GVFVUEeM_EO_4A/https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fhtml%2Fdraft-momoka-dnsop-3901bis > > > > > Abstract: > > This memo provides guidelines and documents Best Current Practice > for > operating authoritative and recursive DNS servers given that > queries > and responses are carried in a mixed environment of IPv4 and IPv6 > networks. 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