> On 21 Nov 2018, at 10:58, Alissa Cooper <ali...@cooperw.in> wrote:
> 
> 
> 
>> On Nov 20, 2018, at 9:01 PM, Joe Abley <jab...@hopcount.ca> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi Alissa!
>> 
>> On Nov 20, 2018, at 20:18, Alissa Cooper <ali...@cooperw.in> wrote:
>> 
>>> I support Benjamin's first DISCUSS point. In addition to documenting the
>>> privacy considerations, I think it's important for this document to be 
>>> crystal
>>> clear about who is meant to be doing the data collection -- namely, the 
>>> server
>>> operator. There are some statements in the document that otherwise could be
>>> construed to be encouraging third-party passive monitoring of DNS traffic
>>> without explaining why, which seems like a problem:
>> 
>> I think it may be worth exploring why that's a problem.
>> 
>> I think a capture format should be oblivious to the circumstances of
>> the capture;
> 
> Ok. This document is not at all oblivious, though (see Section 3). I read the 
> document to be implicitly assuming the server operator to be doing (or at 
> least in control of) the data collection, which is why the two statements I 
> pointed out seemed so striking for their lack of declaring that limitation. 
> If the document was meant to be oblivious, it shouldn’t make normative (in 
> the dictionary definition sense) claims about what is ideal, optimal, or 
> necessary. 

Hi Alissa, 

If we update the statements as below to clarify the context would that address 
your concern?

Section 1:
OLD:
"There has long been a need to collect DNS queries and responses on
  authoritative and recursive name servers for monitoring and analysis.”

NEW”
“There has long been a need for server operators to collect DNS queries and 
responses on
  authoritative and recursive name servers for monitoring and analysis.”

Section 3:

OLD:
"In an ideal world, it would be optimal to collect full packet
  captures of all packets going in or out of a name server.”

NEW:
“From a purely server operator perspective, collecting full packet
 captures of all packets going in or out of a name server provides the 
 most comprehensive picture of network activity.”

Sara.


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