Now at last I have had time to read this...sorry for the late response. Let me suggest first of all a change in the structure of the document.
For example, in section 2 where you talk about "message format", just talk about the message format. Query, Answer, Additional information etc. How these play in queries and responses. How EDNS0 fit into this. What header flags are and what they mean. Then you go into resource record sets. And then resource records. That is for the DNS server side and you can move to the client side. And if you define a term like "owner", then you should use it yourself and not say "label" as you do in definition of resource record type (or vice versa) :-) Patrik > On 28 nov 2014, at 16:28, Paul Hoffman <paul.hoff...@vpnc.org> wrote: > > Greetings. Andrew and Kazunori and I have prepared the first draft of what > will hopefully be a useful document collecting definitions that useful in the > DNS community. We fully admit that this is quite rough, and didn't even try > to do definitions for some of the terms that we expect to be filled in before > we are done. > > The idea is that this will be an IETF consensus document, if possible, but we > are not yet asking for adoption in the DNSOP WG, and we might not even later. > For now, we'd like to hear what additional terms should be added, what > clarifications to the terms we already have would be helpful, and so on. > > --Paul Hoffman > >> A new version of I-D, draft-hoffman-dns-terminology-00.txt >> has been successfully submitted by Paul Hoffman and posted to the >> IETF repository. >> >> Name: draft-hoffman-dns-terminology >> Revision: 00 >> Title: DNS Terminology >> Document date: 2014-11-28 >> Group: Individual Submission >> Pages: 9 >> URL: >> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-hoffman-dns-terminology-00.txt >> Status: >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-hoffman-dns-terminology/ >> Htmlized: http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-hoffman-dns-terminology-00 >> >> >> Abstract: >> The DNS is defined in literally dozens of different RFCs. The >> terminology used in by implementers and developers of DNS protocols, >> and by operators of DNS systems, has sometimes changed in the decades >> since the DNS was first defined. This document gives current >> definitions for many of the terms used in the DNS in a single >> document. > > _______________________________________________ > DNSOP mailing list > DNSOP@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop
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