On Apr 15, 2014, at 8:06 PM, Paul Hoffman <paul.hoff...@vpnc.org> wrote:
> This looks greatly improved from the -03 that started the WG Last Call. It > clears almost all of my concerns, particularly about the overly-loose > language. > > There is still one assumption being made of the reader that I think can > cleanly be cleared up. The first paragraph of the introduction says: > > When a DNS operator first signs their zone, they need to communicate > their DS record(s) (or DNSKEY(s)) to their parent through some out- > of-band method to complete the chain of trust. > > I think the concept of what is being told to the parent would be much clearer > as: > > When a DNS operator first signs their zone, they need to communicate their > keying material to their parent through some out-of-band method to complete > the chain of trust. Depending on the desires of the parent, the child might > send their DNSKEY record, a DS record, or both. I agree this text is much better. Olafur _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list DNSOP@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop