On Apr 15, 2014, at 8:06 PM, Paul Hoffman <paul.hoff...@vpnc.org> wrote:

> This looks greatly improved from the -03 that started the WG Last Call. It 
> clears almost all of my concerns, particularly about the overly-loose 
> language.
> 
> There is still one assumption being made of the reader that I think can 
> cleanly be cleared up. The first paragraph of the introduction says:
> 
>   When a DNS operator first signs their zone, they need to communicate
>   their DS record(s) (or DNSKEY(s)) to their parent through some out-
>   of-band method to complete the chain of trust.
> 
> I think the concept of what is being told to the parent would be much clearer 
> as:
> 
>   When a DNS operator first signs their zone, they need to communicate their
>   keying material to their parent through some out-of-band method to complete
>   the chain of trust. Depending on the desires of the parent, the child might
>   send their DNSKEY record, a DS record, or both.


I agree this text is much better. 

        Olafur

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