Thanks for the feedback. I've updated the recommended message to the 
prospective committer/PMC member. [1]

If no further comments, I'll reformat as appropriate and submit a patch to 
https://github.com/apache/comdev-site/blob/master/source/newcommitter.md

Thanks,
Craig

[1]
### Committer Invite Template
This is the suggested invitation email to send to the newly elected committer, 
sent after a positive result from the PMC vote for a new committer.
    
    ------------------------------------------------------------
    To: joeblo...@foo.net
    Cc: private@[PROJECT].apache.org
    Subject: Invitation to become [PROJECT] committer: Joe Bloggs
        
    Hello [invitee name],

    The [Project] Project Management Committee] (PMC) 
    hereby offers you committer privileges to the project 
    [as well as membership in the PMC]. These privileges are
    offered on the understanding that you'll use them
    reasonably and with common sense. We like to work on trust
    rather than unnecessary constraints. 

    Being a committer enables you to more easily make 
    changes without needing to go through the patch 
    submission process. 

Being a PMC member carries more responsibility, outlined at
https://www.apache.org/dev/pmc.html#what-is-a-pmc 
<https://www.apache.org/dev/pmc.html#what-is-a-pmc>
Briefly, PMC members are expected to actively participate in the governance 
process of the project, including discussing and voting on releases, new 
committers, and PMC candidates.

    Being a committer does not require you to 
    participate any more than you already do. It does 
    tend to make one even more committed.  You will 
    probably find that you spend more time here.

    Of course, you can decline and instead remain as a 
    contributor, participating as you do now.

    A. This personal invitation is a chance for you to 
    accept or decline in private.  Either way, please 
    let us know in reply to this message.

    B. If you accept, the next step is to get an Apache id:
If you are already a committer on another project, reply-all to this message 
and let us know your Apache id and we will set you up with commit privileges 
[and put you on the PMC roster].
If you have earlier submitted an ICLA, reply-all to this message and let us 
know the Public Name and the email under which you submitted your ICLA. If the 
email address you entered on the ICLA is no longer appropriate, submit a new 
ICLA with the new email address and include the project name and requested id 
on the form. See the next bullet for details.
If you have not yet submitted an ICLA, reply-all to this message indicating 
your acceptance and plans to submit your ICLA. 

To file your ICLA, forward this message to secret...@apache.org 
<mailto:secret...@apache.org> and attach your ICLA document. Do not cc: the 
project, as this unnecessarily exposes your Personally Identifiable 
Information. 
This will allow the Secretary to verify that you have been invited to become a 
committer. Be sure to put your requested Apache id and the project name on the 
ICLA form. This will allow the Secretary to request your account and notify the 
project directly. Within a few days you will receive instructions for logging 
in and changing your password.

Details of the iCLA and instructions for submitting the forms are found here: 
https://www.apache.org/licenses/#clas
 
<https://www.apache.org/licenses/#clas>https://www.apache.org/licenses/contributor-agreements.html#submitting

 <https://www.apache.org/licenses/contributor-agreements.html#submitting>
C. When creation of your account is noted, you will receive a follow-up message 
with next steps.

We hope you accept and continue to make a difference in the project.

On behalf of the [PROJECT] PMC,
<inviter>

> On Jul 20, 2021, at 4:29 AM, sebb <seb...@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> On Tue, 20 Jul 2021 at 03:08, Craig Russell <apache....@gmail.com> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi,
>> 
>> I would like to suggest how we can improve the new committer onboarding  
>> process by changing the standard committer invitation email. This is after 
>> the new committer has been voted on and if PMC membership is offered, after 
>> the board has been notified with 72 hour notice.
>> 
>> This will eventually become a patch to
>> https://github.com/apache/comdev-site/blob/master/source/newcommitter.md
>> 
>> The big change is that the committer is asked to tell the PMC if they are 
>> already a committer or if they have already submitted an ICLA. This should 
>> reduce the back-n-forth among PMC-committer-secretary-root.
>> 
>> Please let me know what you think. If this seems like a good idea, we can 
>> ask PMCs to update their onboarding processes.
>> 
>> Craig
>> 
>> Craig L Russell
>> c...@apache.org
>> 

Craig L Russell
c...@apache.org

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