Hi, Some (very) minor things.
CD10 - "distributed at no charge to the public." while this may be true at Apache it doesn't have to be the case. 3rd parties wanting to this model may find this a stumbling block. CD40 - Perhaps a footnote? for code donated to Apache the history before Apache may or may not exists. LC30 - Add "compatible with the Apache License" just to make it clear that some OS licences are not compatible with Apache? RE30 - Perhaps remove and/or as we would want both right? OCXX - Do we need add something about merit once given doesn't expire? CO50 Perhaps change "granted more rights" to "granted more responsibility"? INXX - Add something about multiple roles/multiple hats? Thanks, Justin
