Le Sun, Feb 28, 2016 at 03:31:08PM +0800, Paul Wise a écrit : > > I would like to change the current introduction to Debian Pure Blends > on the website to the following text.
Hi Paul and everybody, maybe I am too much of a scientist, but I prefer when the first paragraph directly answers to the question "what is this ?". I tend to lose interest or focus when reading narratives such as the first paragraph you propose below. > <p> > A general purpose operating system like Debian can be the perfect solution for > many different areas of life. > Whether you want Debian to work for you in the classroom, as a games machine, > or in the office, each area has its own unique needs and requires a > different subset of packages tailored in a different way. > </p> This said, the paragraph below (or the alternative versions discussed in this thread) would be a nice improvement to the current page. Thank you for proposing this. > <p> > Debian Pure Blends are a solution for groups of people with specific needs. > Not only do they provide handy collections (meta-packages) of specific > packages, > but they also ease installation and configuration for the intended purpose. > They cover the interests of different groups of people, who might be children, > scientists, gamers, lawyers, medical staff, visually impaired people, etc. > Their common goal is to make installation and administration of computers > for their target audience as easy as possible and to connect their audience > with the people who write or package software for that audience. > </p> By the way, I do not see the paragraph starting by "Debian Pure Blends are not forks from" in your proposal. Are you suggesting to remove it ? Have a nice day, -- Charles
