On Sat, Mar 5, 2016 at 3:23 PM, Paul Wise wrote: > On Tue, Mar 1, 2016 at 9:18 PM, Charles Plessy wrote: > >> maybe I am too much of a scientist, but I prefer when the first paragraph >> directly answers to the question "what is this ?". I tend to lose interest >> or >> focus when reading narratives such as the first paragraph you propose below. > > The second paragraph doesn't make much sense to jump right into > without the first paragraph there to introduce it.
I've committed the first paragraph and the changes to the second one that were missed. -- bye, pabs https://wiki.debian.org/PaulWise
