On Fri, Mar 26, 2004 at 01:41:30PM +1100, Pascal Hakim wrote: > On Fri, 2004-03-26 at 12:50, Matt Kraai wrote: > > > Index: events/requirements.wml > > > =================================================================== > > > RCS file: /cvs/webwml/webwml/english/events/requirements.wml,v > > > retrieving revision 1.4 > > > diff -u -r1.4 requirements.wml > > > --- events/requirements.wml 25 Jul 2002 19:05:30 -0000 1.4 > > > +++ events/requirements.wml 26 Mar 2004 00:23:24 -0000 > > > @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ > > > > > > <p>In short, such a booth would be look very poor. It is quite > > > questionable whether this would demonstrate the high level of an > > > -exhibition, poor project or display that the organizers don't have > > > +exhibition, it displays that the organizers don't have > > > money or don't want to spend money on free software projects. > > > </p> > > > > > > > Why? The original isn't elegant, but it doesn't seem incorrect. > > You need to, at the very least, do a s/would be/would/ on the first > line.
Done. -- Matt Kraai [EMAIL PROTECTED] http://ftbfs.org/
