On Thu, Mar 25, 2004 at 05:50:42PM -0800, Matt Kraai wrote: > On Fri, Mar 26, 2004 at 01:49:29AM +0100, Jens Seidel wrote: > > I attached a patch which fixes a few more typos which mainly affects > > mail.wml files. > > Do you have write access? If so, please commit these except for > the change to events/requirements.wml (and please bump the > translation-check headers).
Done. Since this is the first time that you accept changes to mail.wml files I thought it would be a good idea to post this on this list. > > Index: events/requirements.wml > > =================================================================== > > RCS file: /cvs/webwml/webwml/english/events/requirements.wml,v > > retrieving revision 1.4 > > diff -u -r1.4 requirements.wml > > --- events/requirements.wml 25 Jul 2002 19:05:30 -0000 1.4 > > +++ events/requirements.wml 26 Mar 2004 00:23:24 -0000 > > @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ > > > > <p>In short, such a booth would be look very poor. It is quite > > questionable whether this would demonstrate the high level of an > > -exhibition, poor project or display that the organizers don't have > > +exhibition, it displays that the organizers don't have > > money or don't want to spend money on free software projects. > > </p> > > > > Why? The original isn't elegant, but it doesn't seem incorrect. After reading all the explanations I agree. The first times I read this I assumed this contains something as follows: It is quite questionable whether this [missing tables, chairs and a carpet] would display that the organizers don't have money or don't want to spend money on free software projects. I also expected a "and of a" in front of "poor project". I will not touch this file... Jens
