Thank you for the new patch, Ben. Comments:
- please move the License-Grant field to the end of the list of fields to avoid any renumbering - please strip the rewordings that you've made to other parts of the document, so this patch addresses this bug alone. If you want to make those changes, please file separate 'informative' bugs against debian-policy; these do not need to be seconded and are applied at the discretion of the policy editors. - I think you've used too many spaces to indent the License-Grant text in the examples. Shouldn't it be just one space? - since the field is optional, I don't think we should modify every example to include License-Grant. Perhaps consider reducing the number of times you add it? - note that this bug doesn't apply to policy's HEAD anymore because we've switched to rST; it would be nice if you could rebase but I will happily do this on your behalf as I was partly responsible for the switch -- Sean Whitton
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