* Giulio Paci <giuliop...@gmail.com>, 2012-08-10, 22:46:
I'm unable to parse the second sentence of the long description.
You are right. I should have read it more carefully. I tried to restate
it.
So it's currently:
| TinySVM is an implementation of Support Vector Machines (SVMs), for
| the problem of pattern recognition. Support Vector Machines are
| supervised learning models with associated learning algorithms
| have proven suitable for a large number of real-world applications,
| such as text categorization, hand-written character recognition.
...which I still can't parse. Maybe " have proven" -> ", which have been
proven"? Also, a list of two items without a conjunction between them
seems awkward to me.
Disclaimer: I'm not a native speaker of English. (But I heard they
congregate on debian-l10n-english@ldo...)
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