First proposed corrections for feedback before the push as I was sweating to learn git process, i did not fully realize i was adding another layer of corrections on your work Olivier
"Projet Live Systems" term used. Focus on shorter sentences and fluid reading. ++ Philippe 2015-09-21 19:07 GMT+02:00 chals <ch...@chalsattack.com>: > On Mon, Sep 21, 2015 at 5:23 PM, <humbert.olivie...@free.fr> wrote: > > Hi, > > I've been through the translation of the live-boot man page that you can > find here : > http://live.debian.net/gitweb/?p=live-boot.git;a=commitdiff;h=94af924e683b59cba8e08ec6f958e055364eaeab > > > > As usual, feeback welcome. > > Olivier > > > > Great job! > > Just one little thing. "Live Systems" as in "Live Systems Project" > (Capitalized) is a proper noun because it refers to the actual name of > a project. I suggest not to translate it at all or alternatively leave > it as "Projet Live Systems" if you think your readers will understand > it better that way. > > Thank you very much. > > -- > chals > www.chalsattack.com > ch...@chalsattack.com > >
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