Hi,
Holger Wansing <li...@wansing-online.de> wrote:
> victory and Justin,
>
> thanks for your suggestions. They are more than welcome. I will commit that
> soon.
Proposed patch attached.
Holger
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--- choosing.sgml (Revision 11168)
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unless they include release-critical (RC) bug fixes.
<item>When testing is frozen, all the new bugfixes introduced, have to be
manually checked by the members of the release team. This is done to ensure
- that there wont be any unknown severe problems in the frozen
+ that there won't be any unknown severe problems in the frozen
testing.
<item>RC bugs in 'frozen testing' are reduced to either zero or, if
greater than zero, the bugs are either marked as ignored for the release or
@@ -315,7 +315,7 @@
<p>Currently testing is called &testingreleasename;. So, if you change the third field of
<file>/etc/apt/sources.list</file> to '&testingreleasename;', then also you will be running
-testing. But when &testingreleasename; becomes stable, you will still be tracking &testingreleasename;.</p>
+testing. But even when &testingreleasename; becomes stable, you will still be tracking &testingreleasename;.</p>
<p>Unstable is always called Sid. So if you change the third field of <file>
/etc/apt/sources.list</file> to 'sid', then you will be tracking unstable.
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system, run:
<example>apt purge foo</example>
- <item>To list all packages, for which newer package versions are
+ <item>To list all packages for which newer versions are
available, run:
<example>apt list --upgradable</example>
@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@
Tasks can be installed through the <prgn/tasksel/ program or through
<prgn/aptitude/.
-<p>The Debian installer will typically install automaticaly the task
+<p>Typically, the Debian installer will automatically install the task
associated with a standard system and a desktop environment. The specific
desktop environment installed will depend on the CD/DVD media used, most
commonly it will be the GNOME desktop (<tt/gnome-desktop/ task). Also,
