Hi, Justin B Rye <justin.byam....@gmail.com> wrote: > victory wrote: > > #: debian-faq.sgml:49 pkgtools.sgml:133 > > To list all packages, for which newer package versions are available, run: > > > > 2nd "package" is redundant > > And by English punctuation rules the comma shouldn't be there either. > > > #: debian-faq.sgml:49 pkgtools.sgml:272 > > The Debian installer will typically install automaticaly the task > > > > automatical*l*y > > And it's in the wrong place - you can't put the adverb between verb > and object. We could move it to the end of the sentence, but that's > weak; better to move it to before the verb. Of course this means it > collides with the adverb that's already there, but *that* one can > dodge to sentence-initial position:
victory and Justin, thanks for your suggestions. They are more than welcome. I will commit that soon. victory <victory....@gmail.com> wrote: > #: debian-faq.sgml:49 pkgtools.sgml:95 > .. > apt-get autoremove -> apt autoremove > > # LANG=C apt autoremove > E: Invalid operation autoremove > (it's jessie here) victory: you are right for jessie, that command was added for the stretch version of apt. Holger -- ============================================================ Created with Sylpheed 3.5.0 under D E B I A N L I N U X 8 . 0 " J E S S I E " . Registered Linux User #311290 - https://linuxcounter.net/ ============================================================