On Wed, 14 Sep 2022 12:53:12 GMT, Alan Bateman <al...@openjdk.org> wrote:

> I think you can insert a comma after "when it is the first entry in the 
> stream"? I think that would make it a bit clearer that there are two cases.

Done
> 
> Also I'm wondering if the paragraph should be split into two, meaning "When 
> the Manifest ..." can be the start of a new paragraph. The reason is that the 
> text is trying to explain two things, the first is that the manifest must be 
> at the start of the JAR file, the second is that the ordering that methods 
> are invoked will influence how other methods behave.

Moved to a new paragraph per your suggestion

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PR: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/pull/10045

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