A general rule of thumb is to prefer higher-order functions to explicit recursion. When you are trying to accumulate something (here, you are accumulating a list of zeroes and ones), you can usually use reduce. This is a little bit more tricky here as you need to keep track of which bits of the input string you have consumed as well as your accumulator:
(defn days-to-numbers [day-string] (first (reduce (fn [[accum day-string] day] (let [next-day-string (clojure.string/replace day-string day "")] [(conj accum (if (= day-string next-day-string) 0 1)) next-day-string])) ['() day-string] ["SU" "S" "F" "TH" "W" "T" "M"]))) We'd have to work a bit harder if we weren't so lucky with the order the two-character days appear above, as we *must* inspect the string for SU before S and TH before T. But here we can get away with it. Equivalently, but with an explicit loop/recur: (defn days-to-numbers [day-string] (loop [day-string day-string days ["SU" "S" "F" "TH" "W" "T" "M"] accum '()] (if-let [day (first days)] (let [next-day-string (clojure.string/replace day-string day "")] (recur next-day-string (rest days) (conj accum (if (= day-string next-day-string) 0 1)))) accum))) Another note on your code, you'll commonly see the thread-first macro used to avoid nested calls to functions like clojure.string/replace; if you (require '[clojure.string :as str]) you could then write: (-> day-string (str/replace "SU" "N") (str/replace "TH" "R")) Ray. On 22 September 2014 19:45, J David Eisenberg <jdavid.eisenb...@gmail.com> wrote: > As part of a larger program, I'm testing a function that will turn a > string of days on which a class occurs (such as "MWF") into a list of seven > numbers: (1 0 1 0 1 0 0). > I first translate"TH" (Thursday) to "R" and "SU" (Sunday) to "N" to make > things a bit easier. > > I came up with the following code: > > (defn days-number-maker > "Recursively compare first item in days of week with > first item in string of days. If matching, add a 1, > else add a zero to the result" > [all-days day-string result] > (if (empty? all-days) (reverse result) > (if (= (first all-days) (first day-string)) > (recur (rest all-days)(rest day-string) (conj result 1)) > (recur (rest all-days) day-string (conj result 0))))) > > (defn days-to-numbers > "Change string like MTTH to (1 1 0 1 0 0 0)" > [day-string] > (let [days (clojure.string/replace > (clojure.string/replace day-string #"TH" "R") #"SU" "N")] > (days-number-maker "MTWRFSN" days (list)))) > > The good news: the code works. The bad news: I'm convinced I'm doing it > wrong, in the moral purity sense of the word. Something inside of me says, > "You could have just used (map...) to do this the *right* way," but I can't > see how to do it with (map). So, my two questions are: > > 1) Is there such a thing as "the Clojure way," and if so, > 2) How can I rewrite the code to be more Clojure-ish? > > -- > You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google > Groups "Clojure" group. > To post to this group, send email to clojure@googlegroups.com > Note that posts from new members are moderated - please be patient with > your first post. > To unsubscribe from this group, send email to > clojure+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com > For more options, visit this group at > http://groups.google.com/group/clojure?hl=en > --- > You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups > "Clojure" group. > To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an > email to clojure+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com. > For more options, visit https://groups.google.com/d/optout. > -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Clojure" group. To post to this group, send email to clojure@googlegroups.com Note that posts from new members are moderated - please be patient with your first post. To unsubscribe from this group, send email to clojure+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/clojure?hl=en --- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Clojure" group. To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an email to clojure+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com. For more options, visit https://groups.google.com/d/optout.