Dear RFC Editor,

considering the already mentioned changes by the co-authors, I approve this RFC 
for publication. No further change requests from my side. 

Best Regards
 klaus

> Am 15.07.2025 um 03:16 schrieb rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org:
> 
> Authors,
> 
> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve
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> 
> 3) <!-- [rfced] May we make this into two sentences as follows for ease of
> the reader? Also, would you like to change the adjective "compute intensive"
> to "CPU-intensive", which is used later in this document?
> 
> Original:
>   Once this application is partitioned into its constituent (COIN)
>   programs and deployed throughout a COIN system, utilizing a COIN
>   execution environment, only the "display" (COIN) program may be left
>   in the headset, while the compute intensive real-time VR content
>   processing (COIN) program can be offloaded to a nearby resource rich
>   home PC or a programmable network device (PND) in the operator's
>   access network, for a better execution (faster and possibly higher
>   resolution generation).
> 
> Perhaps:
>   Once this application is partitioned into its constituent (COIN)
>   programs and deployed throughout a COIN system utilizing a COIN
>   execution environment, only the display (COIN) program may be left in
>   the headset. Meanwhile, the CPU-intensive real-time VR content
>   processing (COIN) program can be offloaded to a nearby resource rich
>   home PC or a Programmable Network Device (PND) in the operator's
>   access network for a better execution (i.e., faster and possibly higher
>   resolution generation).
> -->
> 
> 
> 4) <!-- [rfced] How may we update the following text to clarify the
> relationship between the "result" and the phrases that follow?
> 
> Original:
>   The result is the equivalent to 'mobile function offloading', for possible
>   reduction of power consumption (e.g., offloading CPU intensive process
>   functions to a remote server) or for improved end user experience (e.g.,
>   moving display functions to a nearby smart TV) by selecting more suitably
>   placed (COIN) program instances in the overall (COIN) system.
> 
> Option A:
>   The result is the equivalent to mobile function offloading, in that it
>   offers the possible reduction of power consumption (e.g., offloading CPU-
>   intensive process functions to a remote server) or offers an improved
>   end-user experience (e.g., moving display functions to a nearby smart TV)
>   by selecting more suitably placed (COIN) program instances in the overall
>   (COIN) system.
> 
> Option B (if *both* reducing power consumption and improving the end-user
> experience are due to selecting more suitably placed program instances):
> 
>   The result is the equivalent to mobile function offloading because, by
>   selecting more suitably placed (COIN) program instances in the overall
>   (COIN) system, it offers a potential reduction of power consumption (e.g.,
>   offloading CPU-intensive process functions to a remote server) or an
>   improved end-user experience (e.g., moving display functions to a nearby
>   smart TV).
> -->
> 
> 
> 5) <!-- [rfced] We note that the reference [ETSI] uses "Multi-access Edge
> Computing (MEC)" rather than "Mobile Edge Computing (MEC)" as seen in the
> text below. May we update this sentence accordingly?
> 
> Original:
>   The ETSI Mobile Edge Computing (MEC) [ETSI] suite of technologies
>   provides solutions...
> 
> Perhaps:
>  The ETSI Multi-access Edge Computing (MEC) [ETSI] suite of technologies
>  provides solutions...
> -->
> 
> 
> 6) <!-- [rfced] Please clarify this sentence, especially "rather than".
> 
> Original:
>   Also, the ETSI work does not allow for the
>   dynamic selection and redirection of (COIN) program calls to varying
>   edge resources rather than a single MEC application server.
> 
> Option A:
>   Also, the ETSI work does not allow for the
>   dynamic selection and redirection of (COIN) program calls to varying
>   edge resources; it does allow for them to a single MEC application server.
> 
> Option B (stating the reverse):
>   Also, the ETSI work allows for the dynamic selection and
>   redirection of (COIN) program calls to only a single MEC application
>   server, not to varying edge resources.
> -->
> 
> 
> 7) <!-- [rfced] Seems a closing parenthesis was missing on "(service routing
> in [APPCENTRES]...". We added it; please review.
> 
> Original:
>   *  The support for service-level routing of requests (service routing
>      in [APPCENTRES] may support higher flexibility when switching from
>      one (COIN) program instance to another, e.g., due to changing
>      constraints for selecting the new (COIN) program instance.  Here,
>      PNDs may support service routing solutions by acting as routing
>      overlay nodes to implement the necessary additional lookup
>      functionality and also possibly support the handling of affinity
>      relations, i.e., the forwarding of one packet to the destination
>      of a previous one due to a higher level service relation, as
>      discussed and described in [SarNet2021].
> 
> Current:
>   *  The support for service-level routing of requests (such as service
>      routing in [APPCENTRES]) may support higher flexibility when switching
>      from one (COIN) program instance to another (e.g., due to changing
>      constraints for selecting the new (COIN) program instance).  Here, PNDs
>      may support service routing solutions by acting as routing overlay nodes
>      to implement the necessary additional lookup functionality and also
>      possibly support the handling of affinity relations (i.e., the
>      forwarding of one packet to the destination of a previous one due to a
>      higher level service relation as discussed and described in
>      [SarNet2021]).
> -->
> 
> 
> 8) <!-- [rfced] FYI, for readability, we made this into two sentences at
> "that can benefit". Please review.
> 
> Original:
>   XR is one example of the multisource-
>   multidestination problem that combines video and haptics in
>   interactive multi-party interactions under strict delay requirements
>   that can benefit from a functional distribution that includes fog
>   computing for local information processing, the edge for aggregation,
>   and the cloud for image processing.
> 
> Current:
>   XR is one example of the multisource-
>   multidestination problem that combines video and haptics in
>   interactive multiparty interactions under strict delay requirements.
>   As such, XR can benefit from a functional distribution that includes
>   fog computing for local information processing, the edge for
>   aggregation, and the cloud for image processing.
> -->
> 
> 
> 9) <!-- [rfced] Should "re-rerouting" be updated to "re-routing" here?
> 
> Original:
>   More importantly, COIN can enable collaborative XR experiences, where
>   multiple users interact in the same virtual space in real-time, regardless
>   of their physical locations, by allowing resource discovery and
>   re-rerouting of XR streams.
> 
> Perhaps:
>   More importantly, COIN can enable collaborative XR experiences, where
>   multiple users interact in the same virtual space in real time, regardless
>   of their physical locations, by allowing resource discovery and
>   re-routing of XR streams.
> -->
> 
> 
> 10) <!-- [rfced] For clarity, may we update "not networked or distributed"
> in the text below to be more descriptive?
> 
> Original:
>   Hence, implementing such XR solutions necessitates substantial
>   computational power and minimal latency, which, for now, has spurred the
>   development of better headsets not networked or distributed solutions as
>   factors like distance from cloud servers and limited bandwidth can still
>   significantly lower application responsiveness.
> 
> Perhaps:
>   Hence, implementing such XR solutions necessitates substantial
>   computational power and minimal latency, which, for now, has spurred the
>   development of better headsets, rather than spurring networked or
>   distributed solutions, as factors like distance from cloud servers and
>   limited bandwidth can still significantly lower application responsiveness.
> -->
> 
> 
> 11) <!-- [rfced] We have added additional punctuation to the text below. 
> Please
> review these updates and confirm that they do not change your intended
> meaning.
> 
> Original:
>   Information Centric Networking (and related) approaches that combine
>   publish subscribe and distributed storage are also very suited for the
>   multisource-multidestination applications of XR.
> 
> Current:
>   Information-centric networking (and related) approaches that combine,
>   publish, subscribe, and distribute storage are also very suited for
>   the multisource-multidestination applications of XR.
> -->
> 
> 
> 12) <!-- [rfced] For clarity, may we change 'the discovery of' to 
> 'discovering'?
> This makes the action parallel with 'using' (in other words,
> 'they include discovering X and using them to do Y').
> 
> Original:
>   Mechanisms aimed at enhancing the computational and storage capacities of
>   mobile devices could also improve XR capabilities as they include the
>   discovery of available servers within the environment and using them
>   opportunistically to enhance the performance of interactive applications
>   and distributed file systems.
> 
> Perhaps:
>   Mechanisms aimed at enhancing the computational and storage capacities of
>   mobile devices could also improve XR capabilities, as they include
>   discovering available servers within the environment and using them
>   opportunistically to enhance the performance of interactive applications
>   and distributed file systems.
> -->
> 
> 
> 13) <!-- [rfced] Would "federating systems capabilities" be more clear as
> "the federation of systems capabilities" here?
> 
> Original:
>   Yet, there are still very few interactive immersive media applications
>   over networks that allow for federating systems capabilities.
> 
> Perhaps:
>   Yet, there are still very few interactive immersive media applications
>   over networks that allow for the federation of systems capabilities.
> -->
> 
> 
> 14) <!-- [rfced] For readability and clarity of RQ 3.2.3
> 
> a) Is this about two separate research questions ("the use of distributed AI"
> and "the creation of semi-permanent datasets")? May they be two separate
> sentences?
> 
> b) May we adjust "resulting in" to "result in" to add a clear verb to the
> second half of this text?
> 
> Original:
>   *  RQ 3.2.3: Can the use of distributed AI algorithms across both
>      data center and edge computers be leveraged for creating optimal
>      function allocation and the creation of semi-permanent datasets
>      and analytics for usage trending and flow management resulting in
>      better localization of XR functions?
> 
> Perhaps:
>   *  RQ 3.2.3: Can the use of distributed AI algorithms across both
>      data center and edge computers be leveraged for creating optimal
>      function allocation? Can the creation of semi-permanent datasets
>      and analytics for usage trending and flow management result in
>      better localization of XR functions?
> -->
> 
> 
> 15) <!-- [rfced] For ease of the reader, may we break this one sentence into 
> two?
> In addition, may we update the verb "optimize" to "optimizing" as follows?
> 
> Original:
>   *  RQ 3.2.4: Can COIN improve the dynamic distribution of control,
>      forwarding, and storage resources and related usage models in XR,
>      such as to integrate local and fog caching with cloud-based pre-
>      rendering, thus jointly optimizing COIN and higher layer protocols
>      to reduce latency and, more generally, manage the quality of XR
>      sessions, e.g., through reduced in-network congestion and improved
>      flow delivery by determining how to prioritize XR data?
> 
> Perhaps:
>   *  RQ 3.2.4: Can COIN improve the dynamic distribution of control,
>      forwarding, and storage resources and related usage models in XR,
>      such as to integrate local and fog caching with cloud-based pre-
>      rendering? Could this jointly optimize COIN and higher layer protocols to
>      reduce latency and, more generally, manage the quality of XR sessions
>      (e.g., through reduced in-network congestion and improved flow delivery
>      by determining how to prioritize XR data)?
> -->
> 
> 
> 16) <!--[rfced] FYI, this text has been updated to use person-first language.
> Please let us know if you prefer otherwise.
> 
> Original:
>   *  Augmentation of the performance with subtitles, audio-description,
>      actor-tagging, language translation, advertisements/product-
>      placement, other enhancements/filters to make the performance
>      accessible to disabled audience members (removal of flashing
>      images for epileptics, alternative color schemes for color-blind
>      audience members, etc.).
> 
> Current:
>   *  Augmentation of the performance with subtitles, audio description,
>      actor tagging, language translation, advertisements and product
>      placement, and other enhancements and filters to make the
>      performance accessible to audience members who are disabled (e.g.,
>      the removal of flashing images for audience members who have
>      epilepsy or alternative color schemes for those who have color           
>         
>      blindness).
> -->
> 
> 
> 17) <!-- [rfced] For clarity, may we adjust this list as follows?
> 
> Original:
>   *  RQ 4.1.6: Can there be different control levels, e.g., "quite
>      inaccurate & very low latency" (PNDs, deep in the network), "more
>      accurate & higher latency" (more powerful COIN execution
>      environments, farer away), "very accurate & very high latency"
>      (cloud environments, far away)?
> 
> Option A (without parentheses):
>    *  RQ 4.1.6: Can there be different control levels? For example,
>       "quite inaccurate & very low latency" for PNDs deep in the network;
>       "more accurate & higher latency" for more powerful COIN execution
>       environments that are farther away; and "very accurate & very high
>       latency" for cloud environments that are far away.
> 
> Option B (using a sublist):
>   *  RQ 4.1.6: Can there be different control levels?  For example:
> 
>      -  "quite inaccurate & very low latency" for PNDs deep in the
>         network;
>      -  "more accurate & higher latency" for more powerful COIN execution
>         environments that are farther away; and
>      -  "very accurate & very high latency" for cloud environments that
>         are far away.
> -->
> 
> 
> 18) <!-- [rfced] Section 5.1.4: To improve readability and avoid overuse
> of "e.g.," and parentheses, how may these items be updated?
> 
> i) Does "(e.g., virtualized, distributed)" mean the set of choices
> are virtualized and/or distributed?
> 
> Original:
>   *  Supporting the selection of a service destination from a set of
>      possible (e.g., virtualized, distributed) choices, e.g., through
>      constraint-based routing decisions (see [APPCENTRES]) in (COIN)
>      program instances to improve the overall end user experience by
>      selecting a 'more suitable' service destination over another,
>      e.g., avoiding/reducing overload situations in specific service
>      destinations.
> 
> Option A:
>   *  Supporting the selection of a service destination from a set of
>      possible choices (virtualized and distributed) in (COIN) program
>      instances (e.g., through constraint-based routing decisions as seen in
>      [APPCENTRES]) to improve the overall end-user experience by selecting a
>      "more suitable" service destination over another (e.g.,
>      avoiding/reducing overload situations in specific service destinations).
> 
> Option B (moving the last two examples to one final sentence):
>   *  Supporting the selection of a service destination from a set of
>      possible choices (virtualized and distributed) in (COIN) program
>      instances to improve the overall end-user experience by selecting a
>      "more suitable" service destination over another. (For example,
>      selecting through constraint-based routing decisions as seen in
>      [APPCENTRES] may allow avoiding/reducing overload situations in
>      specific service destinations.)
> 
> ii) Does "in-network/switch-based" mean "in-network and switch-based"?
> 
> Original:
>   *  Supporting Layer 2 capabilities for multicast (compute
>      interconnection and collective communication in [APPCENTRES]),
>      e.g., through in-network/switch-based replication decisions (and
>      their optimizations) based on dynamic group membership
>      information, may reduce the network utilization and therefore
>      increase the overall system efficiency.
> 
> Perhaps (moving the example to the end):
>   *  Supporting L2 capabilities for multicast (compute interconnection
>      and collective communication as seen in [APPCENTRES]) may
>      reduce the network utilization and therefore increase the overall
>      system efficiency. For example, this support may be
>      through in-network, switch-based replication decisions (and their
>      optimizations) based on dynamic group membership information.
> -->
> 
> 
> 19) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We have added a subject for "such as exposed through" 
> in
> the text below. Also, we assumed "InfiBand" was intended as "InfiniBand".
> Please review.
> 
> Original:
>   We interpret connected compute resources as operating at a suitable
>   layer, such as Ethernet, InfiBand but also at Layer 3, to allow for
>   the exchange of suitable invocation methods, such as exposed through
>   verb-based or socket-based APIs.  
> 
> Current:
>   We interpret connected compute resources as operating at a suitable
>   layer, such as Ethernet, InfiniBand, but also at Layer 3 (L3), to allow
>   for the exchange of suitable invocation methods, such as those
>   exposed through verb-based or socket-based APIs.
> -->
> 
> 
> 20) <!-- [rfced] Section 5.2.4. Opportunities: How may we add a verb/outcome
> to the second part of this list item, in order to be consistent with the
> rest of the items in this section?
> 
> Original:
>   *  Supporting the enforcement of trust relationships and isolation
>      policies through intermediary (COIN) program instances, e.g.,
>      enforcing specific traffic shares or strict isolation of traffic
>      through differentiated queueing.
> 
> Perhaps:
>   *  Supporting the enforcement of trust relationships and isolation
>      policies through intermediary (COIN) program instances (e.g.,
>      enforcing specific traffic shares or strict isolation of traffic
>      through differentiated queueing) will allow for [what?].
> -->
> 
> 
> 21) <!-- [rfced] May "controller" be plural here in order to be parallel
> with the other plural list items?
> 
> Original:
>   Virtual network programming by tenants could bring benefits such as:
> 
>   *  A unified programming model, which can facilitate porting COIN
>      programs between data centers, 5G networks, and other fixed and
>      wireless networks, as well as sharing controller, code and
>      expertise.
> 
> Perhaps:
>   Virtual network programming by tenants could bring benefits such as:
> 
>   *  A unified programming model, which can facilitate porting COIN
>      programs between data centers, 5G networks, and other fixed and
>      wireless networks, as well as sharing controllers, code, and
>      expertise.
> -->
> 
> 
> 22) <!-- [rfced] Section 6.1.4. Opportunities: We are having a difficult time
> parsing the two items below. How may we revise for clarity?
> (For example, in the second item, please consider where the first "e.g."
> phrase end, and how the second "e.g." connects to the preceding text.)
> 
> Original:
>   *  Supporting service-level routing of training requests (service
>      routing in [APPCENTRES]), with AI services being exposed to the
>      network, where (COIN) program instances may support the selection
>      of the most suitable service instance based on control plane
>      information, e.g., on AI worker compute capabilities, being
>      distributed across (COIN) program instances.
> 
>   *  Supporting the collective communication primitives, such as all-
>      to-all, scatter-gather, utilized by the (distributed) AI workers
>      to increase the overall network efficiency, e.g., through avoiding
>      endpoint-based replication or even directly performing, e.g.,
>      reduce, collective primitive operations in (COIN) program
>      instances placed in topologically advantageous places.
> 
> Perhaps:
>   *  Supporting service-level routing of training requests (such as service
>      routing in [APPCENTRES]) with AI services being exposed to the
>      network, and where (COIN) program instances may support the selection
>      of the most suitable service instance based on control plane
>      information (e.g., on AI worker compute capabilities being
>      distributed across (COIN) program instances).
> 
>   *  Supporting the collective communication primitives, such as all-
>      to-all and scatter-gather, utilized by the (distributed) AI
>      workers may increase the overall network efficiency (e.g.,
>      through avoiding endpoint-based replication or even directly
>      performing (or reducing) collective primitive operations) in (COIN)
>      program instances placed in topologically advantageous places.
> -->
> 
> 
> 23) <!-- [rfced] Please clarify the final phrase; what is the subject of
> "reduce"?  In other words, what educe in a central (COIN) program
> 
> Original:
>   *  RQ 6.1.1: What are the communication patterns that may be
>      supported by collective communication solutions, where those
>      solutions directly utilize (COIN) program instance capabilities
>      within the network (e.g., reduce in a central (COIN) program
>      instance)?
> -->
> 
> 
> 24) <!-- [rfced] Section 7:
> 
> a) In Figure 4 (and throughout Section 7) some words are in all caps, while
> others are not. Should these partially capitalized phrases be updated to match
> the other categories that appear in title case?
> 
> Partially capitalized:
>   VISION(S) for COIN
>   ENABLING TECHNOLOGIES for COIN
>   Distributed Computing FRAMEWORKS and LANGUAGES to COIN
> 
> Title case:
>   Applicability Areas
>   Transport
>   App Design
>   Data Processing
>   Routing & Forwarding
>   (Industrial) Control
> 
> b) FYI - We have replaced the asterisks in this section with quotation marks
> to indicate that these terms refer to items in Figure 4.
> -->
> 
> 
> 25) <!--[rfced] References:
> 
> a) For [Stoyanov], would you like to change the URL for this
> reference or leave it as is?
> 
> Current: https://eng.ox.ac.uk/media/6354/stoyanov2020mtpsa.pdf
> Perhaps: https://dl.acm.org/doi/10.1145/3426744.3431329
> 
> b) For [SA2-5GLAN], the URL provided returns a "403 - Forbidden"
> error. We were unable to find an alternative source for this
> reference. Please review and let us know how to update.
> 
> Current:
>   [SA2-5GLAN]
>              3GPP-5glan, "SP-181129, Work Item Description,
>              Vertical_LAN(SA2), 5GS Enhanced Support of Vertical and
>              LAN Services", 3GPP , 2021,
>              <http://www.3gpp.org/ftp/tsg_sa/TSG_SA/Docs/SP-
>              181120.zip>.
> -->
> 
> 
> 26) <!--[rfced] We see that draft-trossen-icnrg-ip-icn-5glan
> was replaced by draft-trossen-icnrg-internet-icn-5glan. Would you
> like this reference to be updated to the latter?
> 
> Current:
>   [ICN-5GLAN]
>              Trossen, D., Wang, C., Robitzsch, S., Reed, M., AL-Naday,
>              M., and J. Riihijarvi, "IP-based Services over ICN in 5G
>              LAN Environments", Work in Progress, Internet-Draft,
>              draft-trossen-icnrg-ip-icn-5glan-00, 6 June 2019,
>              <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-trossen-
>              icnrg-ip-icn-5glan-00>.
> -->
> 
> 
> 27) <!-- [rfced] Terminology and Abbreviations:
> 
> a) We note different uses of (COIN) and COIN in the terms below.
> For consistency and ease of the reader, we suggest removing the
> parentheses in "(COIN)" when it appears in these instances. Please review
> and let us know any objections.
> 
> (COIN) execution environment
> (COIN) system
> (COIN) programs
> (COIN) program instances
> 
> COIN execution environment
> COIN system
> COIN programs
> COIN program instances
> 
> 
> b) In general, is there is a specific meaning that is intended when "COIN"
> is in parentheses? If so, could you add a sentence to define that
> meaning? For example, why is COIN in parentheses in this text?
> 
> Section 3.1.2:
>   However, the execution of a (COIN) program may be moved to other
>   (e.g., more suitable) devices, including PNDs, which have exposed the
>   corresponding (COIN) program as individual (COIN) program instances
>   to the (COIN) system by means of a 'service identifier'.
> 
> We note this convention was also used in draft-irtf-coinrg-coin-terminology
> (now expired), but it does not seem to be explained.
> 
> 
> c) How should 'CN' be expanded here?
> 
>   Works such as those in [SILKROAD] utilize ASICs to replace server-based
>   load balancing with significant cost reductions, thus showcasing the
>   potential for in-network CN operations.
> 
> d) FYI, we added expansions for the following abbreviations upon first use.
> Please review each expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness.
> 
> Application-Specific Integrated Circuit (ASIC)
> Graphics Processing Units (GPUs)
> Information-Centric Network (ICN)
> Internet of Things (IoT)
> Java Virtual Machine (JVM)
> Message Passing Interface (MPI)
> Quality of Experience (QoE)
> Remote Direct Memory Access (RDMA)
> Software-Defined Network (SDN)
> Standards Development Organization (SDO)
> User Plane Function (UPF)
> -->
> 
> 
> 28) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the online
> Style Guide <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
> and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of this nature typically
> result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers.
> 
> a) For example, please consider whether "native" should be updated here:
> 
>  so-called 'cloud-native' applications for applications developed
> 
> b) In addition, please consider whether instances of "traditional"
> and "traditionally" should be updated for clarity.  While the NIST website
> <https://web.archive.org/web/20250214092458/https://www.nist.gov/nist-research-library/nist-technical-series-publications-author-instructions#table1>
> indicates that this term is potentially biased, it is also ambiguous.
> "Tradition" is a subjective term, as it is not the same for everyone.
> -->
> 
> 
> Thank you.
> 
> RFC Editor/kf/ar
> 
> 
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> RFC9817 (draft-irtf-coinrg-use-cases-07)
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> Title            : Use Cases for In-Network Computing
> Author(s)        : I. Kunze, K. Wehrle, D. Trossen, M.-J. Montpetit, X. de 
> Foy, D. Griffin, M. Rio
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