Dear RPC team, Thank you for your comments for AUTH48.
Please find below my responses for comments 21 and 25. I approve this RFC for publication. Best Regards Cheers, Xavier. On 15.07.25, 03:16, "rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <mailto:rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>" <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <mailto:rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>> wrote: Authors, While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve the following questions, which are also in the XML file. [...] 21) <!-- [rfced] May "controller" be plural here in order to be parallel with the other plural list items? Original: Virtual network programming by tenants could bring benefits such as: * A unified programming model, which can facilitate porting COIN programs between data centers, 5G networks, and other fixed and wireless networks, as well as sharing controller, code and expertise. Perhaps: Virtual network programming by tenants could bring benefits such as: * A unified programming model, which can facilitate porting COIN programs between data centers, 5G networks, and other fixed and wireless networks, as well as sharing controllers, code, and expertise. --> [xdf] I agree with your proposed change, thanks. 25) <!--[rfced] References: a) For [Stoyanov], would you like to change the URL for this reference or leave it as is? Current: https://eng.ox.ac.uk/media/6354/stoyanov2020mtpsa.pdf <https://eng.ox.ac.uk/media/6354/stoyanov2020mtpsa.pdf> Perhaps: https://dl.acm.org/doi/10.1145/3426744.3431329 <https://dl.acm.org/doi/10.1145/3426744.3431329> [xdf] I agree with using the proposed URL, thanks. b) For [SA2-5GLAN], the URL provided returns a "403 - Forbidden" error. We were unable to find an alternative source for this reference. Please review and let us know how to update. Current: [SA2-5GLAN] 3GPP-5glan, "SP-181129, Work Item Description, Vertical_LAN(SA2), 5GS Enhanced Support of Vertical and LAN Services", 3GPP , 2021, <http://www.3gpp.org/ftp/tsg_sa/TSG_SA/Docs/SP- <http://www.3gpp.org/ftp/tsg_sa/TSG_SA/Docs/SP-> 181120.zip>. --> [xdf] The URL should be changed to: https://www.3gpp.org/ftp/tsg_sa/TSG_SA/TSGS_82/Docs/SP-181120.zip <https://www.3gpp.org/ftp/tsg_sa/TSG_SA/TSGS_82/Docs/SP-181120.zip> [Banner] [Banner]<https://www.interdigital.com/white_papers/media-over-wireless?utm_source=signature&utm_medium=banner&utm_campaign=mow> Media Over Wireless: Networks for Ubiquitous Video<https://www.interdigital.com/white_papers/media-over-wireless?utm_source=signature&utm_medium=banner&utm_campaign=mow> This e-mail is intended only for the use of the individual or entity to which it is addressed, and may contain information that is privileged, confidential and/or otherwise protected from disclosure to anyone other than its intended recipient. Unintended transmission shall not constitute waiver of any privilege or confidentiality obligation. If you received this communication in error, please do not review, copy or distribute it, notify me immediately by email, and delete the original message and any attachments. Unless expressly stated in this e-mail, nothing in this message or any attachment should be construed as a digital or electronic signature. -- auth48archive mailing list -- auth48archive@rfc-editor.org To unsubscribe send an email to auth48archive-le...@rfc-editor.org
