Hi Rebecca, I have reviewed the changes and am fine with them. Approved.
Jim From: Rebecca VanRheenen <rvanrhee...@staff.rfc-editor.org> Date: Thursday, June 19, 2025 at 4:50 PM To: Adrian Farrel <adr...@olddog.co.uk>, Loa Andersson <l...@pi.nu>, Kireeti Kompella <kireeti.i...@gmail.com>, Matthew Bocci (Nokia) <matthew.bo...@nokia.com>, Greg Mirsky <gregimir...@gmail.com>, Stewart Bryant <s...@stewartbryant.com>, Jie Dong <jie.d...@huawei.com>, James Guichard <james.n.guich...@futurewei.com> Cc: RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>, m...@ietf.org <m...@ietf.org>, mpls-...@ietf.org <mpls-...@ietf.org>, MPLS Working Group <mpls-cha...@ietf.org>, auth48archive <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> Subject: [AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9790 <draft-ietf-mpls-1stnibble-13> Hi Adrian, authors, and Jim*, Adrian - Thank you for providing the updated text. We have updated the files accordingly (see list of files below) Authors - Please let us know if you approve of the document in its current form or if any further updates are needed. *Jim - As AD, please review the changes to the definitions for "MPLS Payload” and "Post-Stack Header (PSH)” in Section 1.2 and let us know if you approve. 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https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fauth48%2Frfc9790&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cdd2313c592fa4f75572a08ddaf72fbd2%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C638859630587994801%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=p5dk0UR5woEad1kZcCxOjuzJU3%2B4F99KGVpd5Hl2%2Ftk%3D&reserved=0<https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9790> Thank you, RFC Editor/rv > On Jun 18, 2025, at 1:20 PM, Adrian Farrel <adr...@olddog.co.uk> wrote: > > RFC Editor (Rebecca), authors, Working Group, > > Document Shepherd here. > > This document seemed to stagnate over the discussion of a couple of minor > editorial points. So I have been chatting with Greg and Loa, and we have > agreed some changes that seem to address the concerns. > > I have based these changes on the text at > https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fauthors%2Frfc9790.txt&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cdd2313c592fa4f75572a08ddaf72fbd2%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C638859630588006248%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=zvxUqzMefFEmoaBNBS1TEXBeoixj07Rfye2NVPGIaEk%3D&reserved=0<https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9790.txt> > > Section 1.2 > OLD > MPLS Payload: All data after the label stack and the optional Post- > Stack header. > NEW > MPLS Payload: All data after the label stack and any optional PSHs. It > is possible that more than one type of PSH may be present in a > packet, and some PSH specifications might allow multiple PSHs of > the same type. The presence rules for multiple PSHs are a matter > for the documents that define those PSHs, e.g., in > [I-D.ietf-mpls-mna-ps-hdr]. > END > > Section 1.2 > OLD > Post-Stack Header (PSH): A field containing information that may be > of interest to the egress Label Switching Router (LSR) or transit > LSRs. Examples include a control word [RFC4385] [RFC8964] or an > associated channel header [RFC4385] [RFC5586] [RFC9546]. A parser > needs to be able to determine where the PSH ends in order to find > the embedded packet. > NEW > Post-Stack Header (PSH): A field containing information that may be > of interest to the egress Label Switching Router (LSR) or transit > LSRs. Examples include a control word [RFC4385] [RFC8964] or an > associated channel header [RFC4385] [RFC5586] [RFC9546]. > END > > > I hope with these two changes, all of the authors can confirm their AUTH48 > proposal. > > Regards, > Adrian >
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