Hi, Srinivas and Eric.

Srinivas, we have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page:

   https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9750

Eric, here are the latest files.  No new iteration.  Please refresh your 
browser:

   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.txt
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.pdf
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.xml
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-auth48diff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side)
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-lastdiff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-lastrfcdiff.html (side by side)

   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff1.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff2.html

Eric, we will wait for your confirmed approval before noting it on the AUTH48 
status page and preparing this document for publication.

Thank you!

RFC Editor/lb


> On Apr 15, 2025, at 9:27 AM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> wrote:
> 
> RPC, 
> 
> Can you please supply the updated version with the correct month for final 
> review?
> 
> -Ekr

> On Apr 14, 2025, at 1:01 PM, Srinivas Inguva <sing...@yahoo.com> wrote:
> 
> Thanks!
> 
> Approved 👍
> 
>> On Apr 14, 2025, at 11:29 AM, Sean Turner <s...@sn3rd.com> wrote:
>> 
>> Srinivas,
>> 
>> Ping ;)
>> 
>> spt
>> 
>>> On Apr 14, 2025, at 1:44 PM, Lynne Bartholomew 
>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Hi, Benjamin, Sean, Emad, and Alan.
>>> 
>>> Sean, thanks for confirming with Benjamin that we need approvals from each 
>>> author.  Thanks also for forwarding Alan's email.
>>> 
>>> Benjamin, Emad, and Alan, we have noted your approvals on the AUTH48 status 
>>> page:
>>> 
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9750
>>> 
>>> Thank you!
>>> 
>>> RFC Editor/lb
>>> 
>>>>> On Apr 11, 2025, at 9:53 AM, Sean Turner <s...@sn3rd.com> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> From Alan,
>>>> 
>>>> -----
>>>> 
>>>> Begin forwarded message:
>>>> 
>>>> From: Alan Duric <a...@duric.net>
>>>> Subject: Re: *[AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9750 
>>>> <draft-ietf-mls-architecture-15> for your review
>>>> Date: April 11, 2025 at 12:52:24 PM EDT
>>>> To: Sean Turner <s...@sn3rd.com>
>>>> Cc: i...@beurdouche.com, emad.om...@gmail.com, sing...@yahoo.com, Eric 
>>>> Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com>
>>>> 
>>>> Hey Sean,
>>>> 
>>>> also approved from my side.
>>>> 
>>>> Have a good weekend all!
>>>> 
>>>> /alan
>>>> 
>>>> ----
>>>> 
>>>> spt
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>>>> On Apr 11, 2025, at 9:48 AM, Emad Omara <emad.om...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> I approve
>>> 
>>> 
>>>>> On Apr 11, 2025, at 9:47 AM, Sean Turner <s...@sn3rd.com> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> You do - and thanks!
>>>> 
>>>> spt
>>>> 
>>>>> On Apr 11, 2025, at 12:41 PM, Benjamin Beurdouche <i...@beurdouche.com> 
>>>>> wrote:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Not sure if all authors need to approve it or not... Just in case, I do 
>>>>> approve… : )
>>>>> Best,
>>>>> Benjamin
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>>> On 10 Apr 2025, at 19:45, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> wrote:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> I approve publication once the data is adjusted.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> On Thu, Apr 10, 2025 at 9:36 AM Lynne Bartholomew 
>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>>>>>> Hi, Eric and coauthors.  Eric, thanks for the pointer to the latest XML 
>>>>>> file.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Please note that in order to avoid any mismatches between your GitHub 
>>>>>> repository and our copies of the files, we will wait until we prepare 
>>>>>> this document for publication before updating the publication-month 
>>>>>> entry.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> The latest files are posted here.  Please refresh your browser:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.txt
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.pdf
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.html
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.xml
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-auth48diff.html
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by 
>>>>>> side)
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-lastdiff.html
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-lastrfcdiff.html (side by 
>>>>>> side)
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff1.html
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff2.html
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Authors, please let us know whether you approve this document in its 
>>>>>> current form or additional changes are needed.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Thanks again!
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> On Apr 9, 2025, at 10:38 AM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> wrote:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> It's in the GitHub repository in the same place as before:
>>>>>>> https://github.com/mlswg/mls-architecture/blob/main/rfc9750-draft.xml
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> On Wed, Apr 9, 2025 at 9:54 AM Lynne Bartholomew 
>>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>>>>>>> Hi, Eric.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Sorry -- does this mean that a new XML file is available somewhere?  If 
>>>>>>> yes, please provide a pointer to it.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> On Apr 9, 2025, at 9:21 AM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> wrote:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> The PR was merged last week.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> On Wed, Apr 9, 2025 at 9:18 AM Lynne Bartholomew 
>>>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>>>>>>>> Hi, Sean and Eric.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> On March 26, Eric let us know that an updated XML was available at 
>>>>>>>> <https://github.com/mlswg/mls-architecture/blob/main/rfc9750-draft.xml>.
>>>>>>>>   We fetched the March 26 XML, created the output files, and posted 
>>>>>>>> them on March 31 (10:32 AM PST).  We had some follow-up questions, and 
>>>>>>>> Eric replied (also March 31) with "I have created a PR to address your 
>>>>>>>> comments and detailed how they were addressed."  We also asked for and 
>>>>>>>> received AD approval re. some of the changes.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> It looks like we now need the following:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> * The latest XML file from Eric (incorporating the March 31 updates), 
>>>>>>>> so that we can create and post the latest output files
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> * Approvals from authors (see 
>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9750) if no further updates are 
>>>>>>>> needed
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> On Apr 9, 2025, at 8:46 AM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> wrote:
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Lynne,
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Can you advise on the status? When should we expect "final" versions 
>>>>>>>>> of the document to be up for review/approval?
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> On Apr 3, 2025, at 1:11 PM, Sean Turner <s...@sn3rd.com> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Are we waiting on a new version that incorporates ekr’s updates?
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> spt
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> On Wed, Apr 2, 2025 at 8:32 AM Lynne Bartholomew 
>>>>>>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>> Hi, Paul.  So noted:
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9750
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> On Apr 2, 2025, at 5:23 AM, Paul Wouters <paul.wout...@aiven.io> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> Approved as AD - these were brought to attention of the WG.
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> Paul
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mon, Mar 31, 2025 at 2:13 PM Lynne Bartholomew 
>>>>>>>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi, Eric.  Thanks for the quick updates!
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mar 31, 2025, at 10:53 AM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> I have created a PR to address your comments and detailed how 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> they were addressed.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://github.com/mlswg/mls-architecture/pull/332
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 1. Should 'rotation of "last resort" KeyPackage.' be 'rotation 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> of the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "last resort" KeyPackage.'?
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Yes, I have changed it.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 2. Apologies for missing this earlier: Should "ciphersuite" be 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "cipher
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> suite" in running text, per usage in RFC 9420, or OK to leave as
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> is?
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Yes, I have changed it.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 3. Regarding "A Delivery Service (DS), which can receive and
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>   distribute messages between group members.  In the case of 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> group
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>   messaging, the delivery service ...": Would you like "delivery
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>   service" to be "Delivery Service" (which we still see used
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>   several times elsewhere) or "DS"?  (We also see "Authentication
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>   Service" spelled out in Sections 8.4.3 and 8.4.3.1.)
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> I have changed "delivery service" to "DS". I changed to AS in
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 8.4.3.1 but I think it makes the most sense as-is in the first
>>>>>>>>>>>>> use in 8.4.3.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 4. Should "prevents selective attack on" be "prevents selective
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> attacks on"?
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> It is correct as is.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 5. Should "Handshake or application message" be "handshake or
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> application message", per "handshake" as used elsewhere?
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Fixed.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 6. As we are now following CMOS guidance to initial-capitalize
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> prepositions of five or more letters in titles, would you 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> consider
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> changing "against" to "Against" in "No Protection against Replay 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> by
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Insiders"?
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Changed.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mon, Mar 31, 2025 at 10:32 AM Lynne Bartholomew 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi, Eric and *AD (Paul or Deb).
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Eric, thank you for making the additional updates and for the 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> latest XML file!  We have follow-up items for you and for the AD, 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> as flagged below.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> * AD:  It is difficult for us to determine whether or not some of 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> the new updates to this document might be considered "beyond 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> editorial".  Please review the following, and let us know any 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> concerns.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 1. update to Section 2.1, Paragraph 3 (re. LeafNode)
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 2. updated "... used only once, and init_key ..." sentence in 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Section 5.1
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 3. new Recommendation near the end of Section 5.1
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 4. update to the "A policy for when two credentials" bullet in 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Section 7
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 5. removal of the last paragraph of Section 8.1.4
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 6. change from "to attack forward security" to "to attack 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> post-compromise security" in Section 8.4.2
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 7. new Section 8.6 ("No Protection against Replay by Insiders")
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Eric:  A few follow-up items for you:
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 1. Should 'rotation of "last resort" KeyPackage.' be 'rotation of 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> the "last resort" KeyPackage.'?
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 2. Apologies for missing this earlier:  Should "ciphersuite" be 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> "cipher suite" in running text, per usage in RFC 9420,
>>>>>>>>>>>>> or OK to leave as is?
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 3. Regarding "A Delivery Service (DS), which can receive and 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> distribute messages
>>>>>>>>>>>>>   between group members.  In the case of group messaging, the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>   delivery service ...":
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Would you like "delivery service" to be "Delivery Service" (which 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> we still see used several times elsewhere) or "DS"?
>>>>>>>>>>>>> (We also see "Authentication Service" spelled out in Sections 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 8.4.3 and 8.4.3.1.)
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 4. Should "prevents selective attack on" be "prevents selective 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> attacks on"?
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 5. Should "Handshake or application message" be "handshake or 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> application message", per "handshake" as used elsewhere?
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 6. As we are now following CMOS guidance to initial-capitalize 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> prepositions of five or more letters in titles,
>>>>>>>>>>>>> would you consider changing "against" to "Against" in "No 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Protection against Replay by Insiders"?
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> We have posted the latest files here.  Please refresh your 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> browser:
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.txt
>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.pdf
>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.xml
>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html (side by 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> side)
>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-auth48rfcdiff.html 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff1.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff2.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thanks again!
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mar 26, 2025, at 1:04 PM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I have now completed my review and made final edits. All open 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> issues for this version are closed.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The updated XML can be found at:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://github.com/mlswg/mls-architecture/blob/main/rfc9750-draft.xml
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Tue, Mar 25, 2025 at 8:42 AM Lynne Bartholomew 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi, Eric.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Many thanks for addressing our questions and making the file 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> updates!  We'll look forward to hearing from you after you've 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> done your final review.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mar 24, 2025, at 2:10 PM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Update:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I have now gone through and addressed all the RPC comments and 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> updated the relevant XML and md accordingly.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> My next step will be to actually read the document top to 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> bottom for final review.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mon, Mar 3, 2025 at 8:59 AM Lynne Bartholomew 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <lbartholo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi, Eric.  So noted.  Thank you!
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/lb
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mar 3, 2025, at 6:03 AM, Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I have created issues corresponding to the inline RPC 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> comments/questions and have tagged Lynn in them so she can see 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> progress.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Wed, Feb 26, 2025 at 9:51 AM Jean Mahoney 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <jmaho...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Eric,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On 2/25/25 3:14 PM, Eric Rescorla wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Update:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I have backported the copy-edit changes I approve of and 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> reverted the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> rest in the XML, which can be found here:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://github.com/mlswg/mls-architecture/pull/273 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://github.com/
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> mlswg/mls-architecture/pull/273>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://github.com/ekr/mls-architecture/blob/merge_rpc_comments/rfc9750-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> draft.xml <https://github.com/ekr/mls-architecture/blob/
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> merge_rpc_comments/rfc9750-draft.xml>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I will next go through the RPC's substantive questions and 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> file GitHub
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> issues for each of them so we can work through them. Is there 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> someone
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> you would like tagged on these issues?
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Lynne Bartholomew will be the RFC Editor handling this 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> document's
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> AUTH48. Her GitHub username is lbartholomew-rpc.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Best regards,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Jean
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Tue, Feb 25, 2025 at 9:46 AM Eric Rescorla <e...@rtfm.com
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <mailto:e...@rtfm.com>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  Per private communication with Alan: a...@duric.net
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  <mailto:a...@duric.net>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  On Tue, Feb 25, 2025 at 7:50 AM Paul Wouters 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <paul.wout...@aiven.io
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  <mailto:paul.wout...@aiven.io>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>      datatracker says alan.du...@globalipsound.com
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>      <mailto:alan.du...@globalipsound.com>, added to CC:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>      Paul
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>      On Tue, Feb 25, 2025 at 10:47 AM Jean Mahoney
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>      <jmaho...@staff.rfc-editor.org 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <mailto:jmaho...@staff.rfc-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>      editor.org>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          Hi Ekr,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          On 2/24/25 8:32 PM, Eric Rescorla wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mon, Feb 24, 2025 at 4:12 PM Jean Mahoney
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          <jmaho...@staff.rfc-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org <http://editor.org>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          <mailto:jmaho...@staff.rfc-editor.org
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          <mailto:jmaho...@staff.rfc-editor.org>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  Hi Ekr,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  On 2/24/25 5:30 PM, Eric Rescorla wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi folks,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> This document was prepared in markdown, so it
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          would be much more
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> convenient to do
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the editorial phase of auth48 in markdown rather
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          than in XML, as I
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> understand has been
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> done for a number of recent documents. I
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          understand that a fair
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  amount
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> of work has
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> already happened here, but is there a possibility
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          of getting a
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  copy of
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the markdown
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> with just the copy edit changes?
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  [JM] As draft-ietf-mls-architecture is a long
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          document (41 pages PDF),
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  it would be time consuming to port the edits into
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          markdown at this time.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Indeed. I've made a repo for the XML [0]. It will take me
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          some time to
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> backport the changes to the .md file and provide updated XML.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          [JM] Understood, and the RPC is aiming to accept md 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> as a
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          submission
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          format in the future.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          Is there another address for Alan Duric? 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> a...@wire.com
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          <mailto:a...@wire.com> bounced.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          Best regards,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          Jean
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [0] https://github.com/ekr/rfc9750 <https://github.com/
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          ekr/rfc9750> <https://github.com/ekr/rfc9750 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          github.com/ekr/rfc9750>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  It would be much easier to start edits in markdown in
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          a future
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  document.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  If you have another markdown file that will be
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          entering the queue soon,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  please let us know, and we can provide an updated
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          markdown file at the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  beginning of AUTH48 as part of one of our process
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          experiments.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  Thanks and best regards,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  RFC Editor/jm
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mon, Feb 24, 2025 at 3:16 PM <rfc-editor@rfc-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          editor.org <mailto:rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  <mailto:rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <mailto:rfc-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          edi...@rfc-editor.org>> <mailto:rfc- <mailto:rfc->
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          <mailto:rfc- <mailto:rfc->>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> edi...@rfc-editor.org <mailto:editor@rfc-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          editor.org> <mailto:edi...@rfc-editor.org
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          <mailto:edi...@rfc-editor.org>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  *****IMPORTANT*****
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  Updated 2025/02/24
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  RFC Author(s):
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  --------------
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  Instructions for Completing AUTH48
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  Your document has now entered AUTH48.  Once it
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          has been
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  reviewed and
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  approved by you and all coauthors, it will be
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          published as an
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  RFC.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  If an author is no longer available, there are
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          several remedies
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  available as listed in the FAQ (https://
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          www.rfc-editor.org/ <https://www.rfc-editor.org/>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  faq/ <https://www.rfc-editor.org/faq/ <https://
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          www.rfc-editor.org/faq/>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  <https://www.rfc-editor.org/faq/ <https://
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          www.rfc-editor.org/faq/> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          <https://www.rfc-editor.org/>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  faq/>>).
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  You and you coauthors are responsible for
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          engaging other parties
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  (e.g., Contributors or Working Group) as
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          necessary before
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>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          authors/rfc9750.pdf>> <https://www.rfc- 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc->
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>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750.pdf <http://editor.org/
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          authors/rfc9750.pdf> <http://editor.org/authors/ 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://
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>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  rfc9750.pdf>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.txt
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750.txt> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          www.rfc- <https://www.rfc->
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750.txt <http://editor.org/
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          authors/rfc9750.txt>> <https://www.rfc- 
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>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750.txt <http://editor.org/
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          authors/rfc9750.txt> <http://editor.org/authors/ 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          editor.org/authors/>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  rfc9750.txt>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  Diff file of the text:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          diff.html 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          diff.html> <https://
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html <http://
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          <http://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          <http://www.rfc- <http://www.rfc->
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9750-diff.html <http://editor.org/
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          authors/rfc9750-diff.html>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          rfcdiff.html 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          rfcdiff.html> <https://
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html <http://
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>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-rfcdiff.html>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          <http://www.rfc- <http://www.rfc->
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>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          xmldiff1.html 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-
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>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          xmldiff1.html 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          xmldiff1.html>> <https://
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>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9750-xmldiff1.html>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          <http://www.rfc- <http://www.rfc->
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>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          rfc9750>> <https://www.rfc- <https://www.rfc-> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://
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>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/auth48/rfc9750 <http://editor.org/
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>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  Please let us know if you have any questions.
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>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  RFC Editor
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>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  --------------------------------------
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  RFC 9750 (draft-ietf-mls-architecture-15)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  Title            : The Messaging Layer
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          Security (MLS)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  Architecture
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  Author(s)        : B. Beurdouche, E. Rescorla,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>          E. Omara, S.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  Inguva,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  A. Duric
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  WG Chair(s)      : Nick Sullivan, Sean Turner
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  Area Director(s) : Deb Cooley, Paul Wouters
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
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>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
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