Thanks for the reminder. I just reviewed the comprehensive diff. Looks good; approved.
—John > On Mar 12, 2025, at 7:15 PM, Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> > wrote: > > [External Email. Be cautious of content] > > > Hi John, > > Just a friendly reminder that we await your approval before continuing with > the publication process. Please see the files at the locations listed below. > > Thank you, > RFC Editor/sg > > >> On Feb 28, 2025, at 11:33 AM, Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >> wrote: >> >> Hi John, >> >> We do not believe we have heard from you regarding this document’s readiness >> for publication. Please review and let us now if any updates are needed. >> >> The current files are available here: >> >> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9736.xml__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CLRu8pD5eX1puHx7v8hzq-GKWwWBxia6cX1Hi6CZeqfbC5m60qnL7TyApl47sYulgCaOPEt0mev8OzvnXUwwnCs$ >> >> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9736.txt__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CLRu8pD5eX1puHx7v8hzq-GKWwWBxia6cX1Hi6CZeqfbC5m60qnL7TyApl47sYulgCaOPEt0mev8Ozvnm0wDiLc$ >> >> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9736.pdf__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CLRu8pD5eX1puHx7v8hzq-GKWwWBxia6cX1Hi6CZeqfbC5m60qnL7TyApl47sYulgCaOPEt0mev8Ozvnzgip0MA$ >> >> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9736.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CLRu8pD5eX1puHx7v8hzq-GKWwWBxia6cX1Hi6CZeqfbC5m60qnL7TyApl47sYulgCaOPEt0mev8OzvnnrC_ouM$ >> >> AUTH48 diffs: >> >> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9736-auth48diff.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CLRu8pD5eX1puHx7v8hzq-GKWwWBxia6cX1Hi6CZeqfbC5m60qnL7TyApl47sYulgCaOPEt0mev8OzvnktOzhi4$ >> >> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9736-auth48rfcdiff.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CLRu8pD5eX1puHx7v8hzq-GKWwWBxia6cX1Hi6CZeqfbC5m60qnL7TyApl47sYulgCaOPEt0mev8OzvnIj0KpXA$ >> (side by side) >> >> Comprehensive diffs: >> >> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9736-diff.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CLRu8pD5eX1puHx7v8hzq-GKWwWBxia6cX1Hi6CZeqfbC5m60qnL7TyApl47sYulgCaOPEt0mev8Ozvn4JtQeUc$ >> >> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9736-rfcdiff.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CLRu8pD5eX1puHx7v8hzq-GKWwWBxia6cX1Hi6CZeqfbC5m60qnL7TyApl47sYulgCaOPEt0mev8OzvnE8OGG0w$ >> (side by side) >> >> We will wait to hear from you before continuing with the publication process. >> >> Thank you, >> RFC Editor/sg >> >> >>>> On Feb 24, 2025, at 10:11 PM, Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >>>> wrote: >>> >>> Hi Med, >>> >>> Thanks for verifying that the update is correct. >>> >>> RFC Editor/sg >>> >>> >>> >>>> On Feb 24, 2025, at 6:17 AM, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote: >>>> >>>> Hi Sandy, >>>> >>>> I think that you captured the intent. Thanks. >>>> >>>> Cheers, >>>> Med >>>> >>>>> -----Message d'origine----- >>>>> De : Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >>>>> Envoyé : jeudi 20 février 2025 00:05 >>>>> À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> >>>>> Cc : Paolo Lucente <pa...@ntt.net>; RFC Editor <rfc-editor@rfc- >>>>> editor.org>; John Scudder <j...@juniper.net>; grow-...@ietf.org; >>>>> grow-cha...@ietf.org; j...@sobornost.net; Warren Kumari >>>>> <war...@kumari.net>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org >>>>> Objet : Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9736 <draft-ietf-grow-bmp-peer-up- >>>>> 05> for your review >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Hi Med, >>>>> >>>>> We have updated the document as described below. >>>>> >>>>> For this one, please review the update closely, as I am not sure >>>>> I understood the desired update. >>>>> >>>>>> (3) S3.2 No explicit mention of the IANA registry in the >>>>> description of the info type. >>>>>> >>>>>> CURRENT: Information Type (2 bytes): defined types are: >>>>> >>>>> It currently 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messages are >>>>>> >>>>>> TLV-structured. Most message types have distinct namespaces >>>>> and >>>>>> IANA >>>>>> >>>>>> registries. However, the namespace of the Peer Up message >>>>> overlaps >>>>>> >>>>>> that of the Initiation message. As the BGP Monitoring >>>>> Protocol has >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>> ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> NEW: >>>>>> >>>>>> [RFC7854] defines a number of different BGP Monitoring >>>>> Protocol (BMP) message types. With the >>>>>> exception of the Route Monitoring message type, these >>>>> messages are >>>>>> TLV-structured. Most message types have distinct namespaces >>>>> and IANA >>>>>> registries. However, the namespace of the Peer Up message >>>>> overlaps >>>>>> that of the Initiation message. As BMP has >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> (2) S3.1 nit >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> CURRENT: provided for here for completeness >>>>>> >>>>>> NEW: provided for completeness >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> (3) S3.2 No explicit mention of the IANA registry in the >>>>> description of the info type. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> CURRENT: Information Type (2 bytes): defined types are: >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Cheers, >>>>>> >>>>>> Med >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> De : Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> Envoyé : >>>>> mercredi 12 >>>>>> février 2025 00:52 À : Paolo Lucente <pa...@ntt.net> Cc : RFC >>>>> Editor >>>>>> <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; John Scudder <j...@juniper.net>; >>>>>> grow-...@ietf.org; grow-cha...@ietf.org; j...@fastly.com; Warren >>>>> Kumari >>>>>> <war...@kumari.net>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org Objet : Re: >>>>> AUTH48: >>>>>> RFC-to-be 9736 <draft-ietf-grow-bmp-peer-up-05> for your review >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Hi Paolo, >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Thank you for your reply. We have updated the document as >>>>> described below. In particular, thank you for your explanation >>>>> regarding 3a and 3d. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Regarding item 6, please verify that this is correct, as it's >>>>> different from what I see in Section 4.4 of RFC 7854. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Please confirm that the bit ruler appears as >>>>> expected. >>>>>> Typically the numbers appear over the hyphens. Compare the >>>>> alignment >>>>>> with the figure in Section 4.4 of RFC 7854 >>>>> <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*__;JSUl!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CLRu8pD5eX1puHx7v8hzq-GKWwWBxia6cX1Hi6CZeqfbC5m60qnL7TyApl47sYulgCaOPEt0mev8OzvnivOZqZM$ >>>>> 2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Frfc%2Frfc7854.html%23section- >>>>> 4.4&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7Caf7fe6848cf14 >>>>> d2f7c6808dd5139ff39%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C >>>>> 638756032026655751%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydW >>>>> UsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ% >>>>> 3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=KeKb3KsRrdx4WkukBLe39B1ZST26m2DbYND4Fe9W >>>>> Afg%3D&reserved=0>. >>>>>> Original (this doc): >>>>>> 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 >>>>> 8 >>>>>> +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+- >>>>> +-+ >>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> I confirm it looks good, it was pretty much copy-pasted :-) >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> From Section 4.4 of RFC 7854: >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> 0 1 2 >>>>> 3 >>>>>> 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 >>>>> 9 0 1 >>>>>> +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+- >>>>> +-+-+-+ >>>>>> | Information Type | Information Length >>>>> | >>>>>> +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+- >>>>> +-+-+-+ >>>>>> | Information (variable) >>>>> | >>>>>> ~ >>>>> ~ >>>>>> +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+- >>>>> +-+-+-+ >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Also including a snapshot in case the figure above doesn't >>>>> display correctly: >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> <image001.png> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Please review the current files and let us know if any >>>>> additional updates are needed. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>> 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>>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> On Feb 5, 2025, at 12:00 PM, Paolo Lucente <pa...@ntt.net> >>>>> wrote: >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Hi, >>>>>> >>>>>> Please see inline: >>>>>> >>>>>> On 4/2/25 00:04, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org wrote: >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Authors, >>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as >>>>>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML >>>>> file. >>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] For clarity, may we replace "oversight" with >>>>> "overlap"? >>>>>> Original: >>>>>> As the BGP Monitoring Protocol has >>>>>> been extended, this oversight has become problematic. >>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>> As the BGP Monitoring Protocol has >>>>>> been extended, this overlap has become problematic. >>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> That works! >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] We find the "corresponding missing registry" >>>>> somewhat >>>>>> confusing because it seems to refer to the registry being >>>>> renamed as >>>>>> "missing". Please consider whether the suggested text would be >>>>> more clear. >>>>>> Original: >>>>>> In this >>>>>> document, we create a distinct namespace for the Peer Up >>>>> message to >>>>>> eliminate this overlap, and create the corresponding missing >>>>>> registry. >>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>> In this >>>>>> document, we create distinct namespaces for the Peer Up and >>>>> Initiation >>>>>> messages to eliminate the overlap. >>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> That works! Thanks! >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] Section 3: Please review the questions below. >>>>>> a) It is unclear to us whether Section 3.1 refers to the >>>>> updates to >>>>>> the "BMP Initiation Information TLVs" registry [1] or if it >>>>> indicates >>>>>> that "Initiation" should to be updated to "Initiation >>>>> Information" in >>>>>> the "BMP Message Types" registry [2], or both. >>>>>> Please review the IANA registries and let us know if updates >>>>> are needed. >>>>>> [1] >>>>>> >>>>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*2__;JSUl!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CLRu8pD5eX1puHx7v8hzq-GKWwWBxia6cX1Hi6CZeqfbC5m60qnL7TyApl47sYulgCaOPEt0mev8Ozvn9JhcnMo$ >>>>> Fwww. >>>>>> iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fbmp-parameters%2Fbmp- >>>>> parameters.xhtml%23initi >>>>>> ation-information- >>>>> tlvs&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7 >>>>>> >>>>> Caf7fe6848cf14d2f7c6808dd5139ff39%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5 >>>>> d20%7 >>>>>> >>>>> C0%7C0%7C638756032026725501%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hc >>>>> GkiOn >>>>>> >>>>> RydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjo >>>>> yfQ%3 >>>>>> >>>>> D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=kONuXoBoZbKf%2B%2F81zg3sFobfYl%2FEnTOe%2B >>>>> vJ%2F >>>>>> oIpTiIE%3D&reserved=0 [2] >>>>>> >>>>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*2__;JSUl!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CLRu8pD5eX1puHx7v8hzq-GKWwWBxia6cX1Hi6CZeqfbC5m60qnL7TyApl47sYulgCaOPEt0mev8Ozvn9JhcnMo$ >>>>> Fwww. >>>>>> iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fbmp-parameters%2Fbmp- >>>>> parameters.xhtml%23messa >>>>>> ge- >>>>> types&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7Caf7fe6848cf >>>>> 14 >>>>>> >>>>> d2f7c6808dd5139ff39%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C >>>>> 63875 >>>>>> >>>>> 6032026732823%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlY >>>>> iOiIw >>>>>> >>>>> LjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0% >>>>> 7C%7C >>>>>> >>>>> %7C&sdata=PFitO9UHG1aVU5y57k9%2B8logYahgeBxu2y8eFwrC5rs%3D&reserv >>>>> ed=0 >>>>>> b) If updating the entry in "BMP Message Types" is intended, we >>>>>> suggest describing the action in the IANA Considerations >>>>> section as >>>>>> well. Please provide text. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> None of the two, we are just updating RFC7854: >>>>>> >>>>>> in section 4.4 of RFC7854 the optional TLV that can follow an >>>>>> Initiation message is called "Information TLV". We are just >>>>> changing >>>>>> that definition to "Initiation Information TLV" to limit the >>>>> scope to >>>>>> the Initialization message only. Nothing to do for IANA here as >>>>> in >>>>>> section 10.5 of RFC7854 the registry is correctly already named >>>>> "BMP >>>>>> Initiation Message TLVs". (see more in my comment to your point >>>>> "d") >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> c) The section title feels overloaded. May we change it as >>>>> follows? >>>>>> Original: >>>>>> 3.1. Revision to Information TLV, Renamed as Initiation >>>>> Information >>>>>> TLV >>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>> 3.1. Revision to the Information TLV >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Agree! >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> d) Somewhat related, Section 3.3 says: >>>>>> Original: >>>>>> The Peer Up Information TLV is used by the Peer Up message. >>>>>> Is the Peer Up Information TLV an IANA-registered value? We >>>>> don't see >>>>>> "Peer Up Information" in the BMP registry. >>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Similarly to before, we are just updating RFC7854. In section >>>>> 4.10 of RFC7854 we find "Information: Information about the peer, >>>>> using the Information TLV (Section 4.4) format. [ .. ]"; so we >>>>> are overloading the term Information TLV for two different >>>>> message types, Initialization and Peer Up; in this document we >>>>> say they are called differently and each will ultimately point to >>>>> a different IANA registry: >>>>>> >>>>>> * Initialization Information TLV field to the existing "BMP >>>>> Initiation >>>>>> Information TLVs" IANA registry; >>>>>> >>>>>> * Peer Up Information TLV field to the newly created (as part >>>>> of this >>>>>> document) "BMP Peer Up Information TLVs" IANA registry; >>>>>> >>>>>> Hope this makes things more clear. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> 4) <!-- [rfced] The text mentions Type 0 being revised, but the >>>>> text >>>>>> that follows also includes definitions for Types 1 and 2. May >>>>> we >>>>>> update the text as follows for clarity? >>>>>> Original: >>>>>> The definition of Type = 0 is revised to be: >>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>> The definition of Type = 0 is revised as shown below. >>>>>> Type = 1 and Type = 2 are unchanged; they are provided >>>>>> for here for completeness. >>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Agree! >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] Because this text is supposed to replace text >>>>> in RFC >>>>>> 9736, we have updated "defined below (Section 3.3)" to read >>>>> "defined >>>>>> in Section >>>>>> 3.3 of RFC 9736." Rationale: if this text were incorporated >>>>> into RFC >>>>>> 7854, "below (Section 3.3)" would be incorrect. >>>>>> Original: >>>>>> * Information: Information about the peer, using the Peer >>>>> Up >>>>>> Information TLV format defined below (Section 3.3). >>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Agree! >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Please confirm that the bit ruler appears as >>>>> expected. >>>>>> Typically the numbers appear over the hyphens. Compare the >>>>> alignment >>>>>> with the figure in Section 4.4 of RFC 7854 >>>>> <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*__;JSUl!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CLRu8pD5eX1puHx7v8hzq-GKWwWBxia6cX1Hi6CZeqfbC5m60qnL7TyApl47sYulgCaOPEt0mev8OzvnivOZqZM$ >>>>> 2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Frfc%2Frfc7854.html%23section- >>>>> 4.4&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7Caf7fe6848cf14 >>>>> d2f7c6808dd5139ff39%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C >>>>> 638756032026740296%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydW >>>>> UsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ% >>>>> 3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=tq6jvCUBRj%2F2Q9dibsvlj5TfZXbkrrTRNjMvP% >>>>> 2BIroqs%3D&reserved=0>. >>>>>> Original (this doc): >>>>>> 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 >>>>> 8 >>>>>> +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+- >>>>> +-+ >>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> I confirm it looks good, it was pretty much copy-pasted :-) >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] Some author comments are present in the XML. >>>>> Please >>>>>> confirm that no updates related to these comments are >>>>> outstanding. >>>>>> Note that the comments will be deleted prior to publication. >>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> I confirm there are no updates and they can be deleted. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion >>>>> of the >>>>>> online Style Guide >>>>>> >>>>> <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*__;JSUl!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CLRu8pD5eX1puHx7v8hzq-GKWwWBxia6cX1Hi6CZeqfbC5m60qnL7TyApl47sYulgCaOPEt0mev8OzvnivOZqZM$ >>>>> 2Fwww >>>>>> .rfc- >>>>> editor.org%2Fstyleguide%2Fpart2%2F%23inclusive_language&data=05%7 >>>>>> >>>>> C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7Caf7fe6848cf14d2f7c6808dd51 >>>>> 39ff3 >>>>>> >>>>> 9%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638756032026747965 >>>>> %7CUn >>>>>> >>>>> known%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsI >>>>> lAiOi >>>>>> >>>>> JXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=2dY >>>>> tGB%2 >>>>>> FxWrWSE3C19Mx7swQwoGjvjbYMf848gEkj2bE%3D&reserved=0> >>>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed. Updates of this >>>>> nature >>>>>> typically result in more precise language, which is helpful for >>>>> readers. >>>>>> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but >>>>> this >>>>>> should still be reviewed as a best practice. >>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> It seems all fine to me, thanks for bringing this up. >>>>>> >>>>>> Paolo >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>> _________________________________________________________________ >>>>> _____ >>>>>> _____________________________________ >>>>>> _ >>>>>> Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des >>>>> informations >>>>>> confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre >>>>> diffuses, >>>>>> exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce >>>>> message >>>>>> par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire >>>>> ainsi que les pieces jointes. 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