Hi, Yes , the change in Abstract is OK. I approve.
// Zahed On Wed, 26 Feb 2025 at 10:25, Karen Moore <kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > Hi Tom, > > Thank you for clarifying. We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status > page for this document (https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9737). > > We now await responses from Zahed (AD) and Trond. > > Best regards, > RFC Editor/kc > > > > On Feb 25, 2025, at 6:21 PM, Thomas Haynes <log...@gmail.com> wrote: > > > > Hi Karen, > > > > I thought I replied - I am fine with the changes. > > > > Thanks, > > Tom > > > >> On Feb 25, 2025, at 6:15 PM, Karen Moore <kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> > wrote: > >> > >> [You don't often get email from kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org. Learn why > this is important at https://aka.ms/LearnAboutSenderIdentification ] > >> > >> Dear Zahed (AD) and *Authors, > >> > >> We don’t believe we have heard from you regarding the approval of the > change to the Abstract. Please review the update below (removal of > wording) and let us know if you approve. The change can also be viewed in > this file: > https://nam10.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fauthors%2Frfc9737-auth48diff.html&data=05%7C02%7Cloghyr%40hammerspace.com%7C8b9e45beb79e4422f7a508dd560b7ad8%7C0d4fed5c3a7046fe9430ece41741f59e%7C0%7C0%7C638761329952696245%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=8pKmyQ%2FOVGs3B7iyu3zecXMgwQftrksxtyCuCl2wcLA%3D&reserved=0 > . > >> > >> Abstract > >> Original: > >> During the recovery phase of startup, the metadata server and the > >> data servers work together to recover state (which files are open, > >> last modification time, size, etc.). > >> > >> Current: > >> During the recovery phase of startup, the MDS and the DSs work > >> together to recover state. > >> > >> [From Thomas]: "We don’t expand on the state in the body of the > document, so this should suffice”. > >> > >> *Authors, we also await your approvals prior to moving forward with > publication. > >> > >> —FILES (please refresh)— > >> > >> The updated XML file is here: > >> > https://nam10.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fauthors%2Frfc9737.xml&data=05%7C02%7Cloghyr%40hammerspace.com%7C8b9e45beb79e4422f7a508dd560b7ad8%7C0d4fed5c3a7046fe9430ece41741f59e%7C0%7C0%7C638761329952713261%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=ppBq8jYR8pws7P%2B3klFc3VLvcfwBCjge%2BZg8mq%2Fx6OQ%3D&reserved=0 > >> > >> The updated output files are here: > >> > 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Best regards, > >>> RFC Editor/kc > >>> > >>> > >>>> On Feb 14, 2025, at 11:05 AM, Karen Moore < > kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > >>>> > >>>> Dear Zahed (AD), > >>>> > >>>> We don’t believe we have heard from you regarding the approval of the > change to the Abstract. Please review the update below and let us know if > you approve. The change can also be viewed in this file: > https://nam10.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fauthors%2Frfc9737-auth48diff.html&data=05%7C02%7Cloghyr%40hammerspace.com%7C8b9e45beb79e4422f7a508dd560b7ad8%7C0d4fed5c3a7046fe9430ece41741f59e%7C0%7C0%7C638761329952849260%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=25%2FXRbbW0iQSftHdzKAyQ9QdL9KTdqvN0jAyrnojUQg%3D&reserved=0 > . > >>>> > >>>> Abstract > >>>> Original: > >>>> During the recovery phase of startup, the metadata server and the > >>>> data servers work together to recover state (which files are open, > >>>> last modification time, size, etc.). > >>>> > >>>> Current: > >>>> During the recovery phase of startup, the MDS and the DSs work > >>>> together to recover state. > >>>> > >>>> [From Thomas]: "We don’t expand on the state in the body of the > document, so this should suffice”. > >>>> > >>>> —FILES 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We have updated our files based on > your responses. Please review and let us know if any further changes are > needed or if you approve the document in its current form. > >>>>> > >>>>> *Zahed, please review the Abstract and let us know if you approve > the removal of some wording that was unclear. The change can be viewed > below and in this file: > https://nam10.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fauthors%2Frfc9737-auth48diff.html&data=05%7C02%7Cloghyr%40hammerspace.com%7C8b9e45beb79e4422f7a508dd560b7ad8%7C0d4fed5c3a7046fe9430ece41741f59e%7C0%7C0%7C638761329952926275%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=dTGSk76F%2BX7vgcwCOAT6DK5vl%2BiOXzIbOFRBYE0uXbE%3D&reserved=0 > . > >>>>> > >>>>> Abstract > >>>>> Original: > >>>>> During the recovery phase of startup, the metadata server and the > >>>>> data servers work together to recover state (which files are open, > >>>>> last modification time, size, etc.). > >>>>> > >>>>> Current: > >>>>> During the recovery phase of startup, the MDS and the DSs work > >>>>> together to recover state. > >>>>> > >>>>> [From Thomas]: "We don’t expand on the state in the body of the > document, so this should suffice”. 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Should "LAYOUTRETURN" > >>>>>>> be included to those sections for consistency with the title? > >>>>>>> If so, please provide the desired text. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Abstract: > >>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> This document presents an > >>>>>> extension to RFC8435 to allow the client to update the metadata > >>>>>> and avoid the resilvering. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> becomes > >>>>>> > >>>>>> This document presents an > >>>>>> extension to RFC8435 to allow the client to update the metadata via > LAYOUTRETURN > >>>>>> and avoid the resilvering. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> I’m fine with the Introduction not mentioning LAYOUTRETURN as we > immediately dive into it in the next Section. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> Document Title > >>>>>>> Original: > >>>>>>> Reporting of Errors via LAYOUTRETURN in NFSv4.2 > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> Perhaps: > >>>>>>> Reporting Errors in NFSv4.2 via LAYOUTRETURN > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> ... > >>>>>>> Short Title > >>>>>>> Original: > >>>>>>> LAYOUT_RECOVERY > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> Perhaps: > >>>>>>> Reporting Errors via LAYOUTRETURN > >>>>>>> --> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> 2) <!--[rfced] We note that "MDS" and "DS" are expanded as > "metadata > >>>>>>> server" and "data server", respectively, in RFC 8435. May we > >>>>>>> expand these terms in the Abstract as shown below (option A) to > >>>>>>> match RFC 8435? > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> After these terms are expanded, would you like to use the > abbreviations? > >>>>>>> There are 37 instances of "metadata server" and 2 instances of > >>>>>>> "data server". If not, and it is desired to have the term written > out, > >>>>>>> should "MDS" and "DS" simply be removed since they are not used > elsewhere > >>>>>>> in the document (option B)? Please let us know your preference. > >>>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> I’m not a big fan of the abbreviations, but it seems that RFC8881 > does use them. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> So yes, please the abbreviations once the terms are expanded. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>>> Original: > >>>>>>> The Parallel Network File System (pNFS) allows for a file's > metadata > >>>>>>> (MDS) and data (DS) to be on different servers. When the metadata > >>>>>>> server is restarted, the client can still modify the data file > >>>>>>> component. During the recovery phase of startup, the metadata > server > >>>>>>> and the data servers work together to recover state (which files > are > >>>>>>> open, last modification time, size, etc.). > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> Perhaps A: > >>>>>>> The Parallel Network File System (pNFS) allows for a file's > metadata > >>>>>>> and data to be on different servers (i.e., the metadata server > (MDS) > >>>>>>> and the data server (DS)). > >>>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> A > >>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>>> or > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> Perhaps B: > >>>>>>> The Parallel Network File System (pNFS) allows for a file's > metadata > >>>>>>> and data to be on different servers. > >>>>>>> --> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> 3) <!--[rfced] Please clarify "which files are open, last > modification > >>>>>>> time, size, etc.)". Are these files used by the servers during > >>>>>>> the recovery phase? > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> Original: > >>>>>>> During the recovery phase of startup, the metadata server > >>>>>>> and the data servers work together to recover state > >>>>>>> (which files are open, last modification time, size, etc.). > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> Perhaps: > >>>>>>> During the recovery phase of startup, the metadata server > >>>>>>> and the data servers work together to recover state > >>>>>>> (the files used are "open", "last modification time", > >>>>>>> "size", etc.). > >>>>>>> --> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> I’m struggling with fixing this one. I think it would be fine to > rewrite it as: > >>>>>> > >>>>>> During the > >>>>>> recovery phase of startup, the metadata server and the > >>>>>> data servers work together to recover state. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> We don’t expand on the state in the body of the document, so this > should suffice. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> 4) <!--[rfced] We are having trouble parsing this sentence. Are > >>>>>>> words missing after "when a lrf_stateid with the value of the > >>>>>>> anonymous stateid of all zeros", or should "when a lrf_stateid" > >>>>>>> perhaps be "with an lrf_stateid"? Please review and let us > >>>>>>> know how we may clarify. > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> Original: > >>>>>>> Also, when the metadata server builds the reply to the LAYOUTRETURN > >>>>>>> when a lrf_stateid with the value of the anonymous stateid of all > >>>>>>> zeros it MUST NOT bump the seqid of the lorr_stateid. > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> Perhaps: > >>>>>>> Also, when the metadata server builds the reply to the LAYOUTRETURN > >>>>>>> with an lrf_stateid with an anonymous stateid value of all > >>>>>>> zeros, it MUST NOT bump the seqid of the lorr_stateid. > >>>>>>> --> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> I agree the original sentence is hard to parse. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> I am fine with the proposed change. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] We note that the following terms appear as > lowercase in > >>>>>>> FCs 8435 and 8881. 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