Hi Tom, Thank you for clarifying. We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page for this document (https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9737).
We now await responses from Zahed (AD) and Trond. Best regards, RFC Editor/kc > On Feb 25, 2025, at 6:21 PM, Thomas Haynes <log...@gmail.com> wrote: > > Hi Karen, > > I thought I replied - I am fine with the changes. > > Thanks, > Tom > >> On Feb 25, 2025, at 6:15 PM, Karen Moore <kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: >> >> [You don't often get email from kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org. Learn why this >> is important at https://aka.ms/LearnAboutSenderIdentification ] >> >> Dear Zahed (AD) and *Authors, >> >> We don’t believe we have heard from you regarding the approval of the change >> to the Abstract. Please review the update below (removal of wording) and >> let us know if you approve. The change can also be viewed in this file: >> https://nam10.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fauthors%2Frfc9737-auth48diff.html&data=05%7C02%7Cloghyr%40hammerspace.com%7C8b9e45beb79e4422f7a508dd560b7ad8%7C0d4fed5c3a7046fe9430ece41741f59e%7C0%7C0%7C638761329952696245%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=8pKmyQ%2FOVGs3B7iyu3zecXMgwQftrksxtyCuCl2wcLA%3D&reserved=0. >> >> Abstract >> Original: >> During the recovery phase of startup, the metadata server and the >> data servers work together to recover state (which files are open, >> last modification time, size, etc.). >> >> Current: >> During the recovery phase of startup, the MDS and the DSs work >> together to recover state. >> >> [From Thomas]: "We don’t expand on the state in the body of the document, >> so this should suffice”. >> >> *Authors, we also await your approvals prior to moving forward 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regards, >>> RFC Editor/kc >>> >>> >>>> On Feb 14, 2025, at 11:05 AM, Karen Moore <kmo...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >>>> wrote: >>>> >>>> Dear Zahed (AD), >>>> >>>> We don’t believe we have heard from you regarding the approval of the >>>> change to the Abstract. Please review the update below and let us know if >>>> you approve. The change can also be viewed in this file: >>>> https://nam10.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fauthors%2Frfc9737-auth48diff.html&data=05%7C02%7Cloghyr%40hammerspace.com%7C8b9e45beb79e4422f7a508dd560b7ad8%7C0d4fed5c3a7046fe9430ece41741f59e%7C0%7C0%7C638761329952849260%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=25%2FXRbbW0iQSftHdzKAyQ9QdL9KTdqvN0jAyrnojUQg%3D&reserved=0. >>>> >>>> Abstract >>>> Original: >>>> During the recovery phase of startup, the metadata server and the >>>> data servers work together to recover state (which files are open, >>>> last modification time, size, etc.). >>>> >>>> Current: >>>> During the recovery phase of startup, the MDS and the DSs work >>>> together to recover state. >>>> >>>> [From Thomas]: "We don’t expand on the state in the body of the document, >>>> so this should suffice”. >>>> >>>> —FILES (please refresh)— >>>> 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Should "LAYOUTRETURN" >>>>>>> be included to those sections for consistency with the title? >>>>>>> If so, please provide the desired text. >>>>>> >>>>>> Abstract: >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> This document presents an >>>>>> extension to RFC8435 to allow the client to update the metadata >>>>>> and avoid the resilvering. >>>>>> >>>>>> becomes >>>>>> >>>>>> This document presents an >>>>>> extension to RFC8435 to allow the client to update the metadata via >>>>>> LAYOUTRETURN >>>>>> and avoid the resilvering. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> I’m fine with the Introduction not mentioning LAYOUTRETURN as we >>>>>> immediately dive into it in the next Section. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Document Title >>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>> Reporting of Errors via LAYOUTRETURN in NFSv4.2 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>>> Reporting Errors in NFSv4.2 via LAYOUTRETURN >>>>>>> >>>>>>> ... >>>>>>> Short Title >>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>> LAYOUT_RECOVERY >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>>> Reporting Errors via LAYOUTRETURN >>>>>>> --> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) <!--[rfced] We note that "MDS" and "DS" are expanded as "metadata >>>>>>> server" and "data server", respectively, in RFC 8435. May we >>>>>>> expand these terms in the Abstract as shown below (option A) to >>>>>>> match RFC 8435? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> After these terms are expanded, would you like to use the abbreviations? >>>>>>> There are 37 instances of "metadata server" and 2 instances of >>>>>>> "data server". If not, and it is desired to have the term written out, >>>>>>> should "MDS" and "DS" simply be removed since they are not used >>>>>>> elsewhere >>>>>>> in the document (option B)? Please let us know your preference. >>>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> I’m not a big fan of the abbreviations, but it seems that RFC8881 does >>>>>> use them. >>>>>> >>>>>> So yes, please the abbreviations once the terms are expanded. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>> The Parallel Network File System (pNFS) allows for a file's metadata >>>>>>> (MDS) and data (DS) to be on different servers. When the metadata >>>>>>> server is restarted, the client can still modify the data file >>>>>>> component. During the recovery phase of startup, the metadata server >>>>>>> and the data servers work together to recover state (which files are >>>>>>> open, last modification time, size, etc.). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Perhaps A: >>>>>>> The Parallel Network File System (pNFS) allows for a file's metadata >>>>>>> and data to be on different servers (i.e., the metadata server (MDS) >>>>>>> and the data server (DS)). >>>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> A >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>> or >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Perhaps B: >>>>>>> The Parallel Network File System (pNFS) allows for a file's metadata >>>>>>> and data to be on different servers. >>>>>>> --> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 3) <!--[rfced] Please clarify "which files are open, last modification >>>>>>> time, size, etc.)". Are these files used by the servers during >>>>>>> the recovery phase? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>> During the recovery phase of startup, the metadata server >>>>>>> and the data servers work together to recover state >>>>>>> (which files are open, last modification time, size, etc.). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>>> During the recovery phase of startup, the metadata server >>>>>>> and the data servers work together to recover state >>>>>>> (the files used are "open", "last modification time", >>>>>>> "size", etc.). >>>>>>> --> >>>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> I’m struggling with fixing this one. I think it would be fine to rewrite >>>>>> it as: >>>>>> >>>>>> During the >>>>>> recovery phase of startup, the metadata server and the >>>>>> data servers work together to recover state. >>>>>> >>>>>> We don’t expand on the state in the body of the document, so this should >>>>>> suffice. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 4) <!--[rfced] We are having trouble parsing this sentence. Are >>>>>>> words missing after "when a lrf_stateid with the value of the >>>>>>> anonymous stateid of all zeros", or should "when a lrf_stateid" >>>>>>> perhaps be "with an lrf_stateid"? Please review and let us >>>>>>> know how we may clarify. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>> Also, when the metadata server builds the reply to the LAYOUTRETURN >>>>>>> when a lrf_stateid with the value of the anonymous stateid of all >>>>>>> zeros it MUST NOT bump the seqid of the lorr_stateid. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>>> Also, when the metadata server builds the reply to the LAYOUTRETURN >>>>>>> with an lrf_stateid with an anonymous stateid value of all >>>>>>> zeros, it MUST NOT bump the seqid of the lorr_stateid. >>>>>>> --> >>>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> I agree the original sentence is hard to parse. >>>>>> >>>>>> I am fine with the proposed change. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] We note that the following terms appear as lowercase in >>>>>>> FCs 8435 and 8881. 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