Hi All,
+1
Scott Johnson
On Wed, 28 Jul 2021, Mike Burns wrote:
Hello,
I concur that Bill's changes make the text flow better.
Regards,
Mike Burns
-----Original Message-----
From: ARIN-PPML <[email protected]> On Behalf Of William Herrin
Sent: Wednesday, July 28, 2021 3:43 PM
Cc: ARIN-PPML List <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: [arin-ppml] Revised - Editorial Change ARIN-edit-2020-9: Section 8
Editorial Clean-up
On Tue, Jul 27, 2021 at 9:56 AM ARIN <[email protected]> wrote:
In Section 8.3.:
Under “Conditions on source of the transfer,” replace “Number resources
received as the result of an 8.2 transfer are out of scope for the purposes of
this restriction” with “This restriction does not include 8.2 transfers.”
Howdy,
They both seem about the same to me. The replacement is less clumsy than the
original but still clumsy. Just throwing out some wordsmithing here:
Current;
The source entity must not have received a transfer, allocation, or assignment
of IPv4 number resources from ARIN for the 12 months prior to the approval of a
transfer request. Number resources received as the result of an 8.2 transfer
are out of scope for the purposes of this restriction.
Suggested:
Excluding section 8.2 transfers, the source entity must not have received a
transfer, allocation, or assignment of IPv4 number resources from ARIN during
the 12 months prior to the approval of a transfer request.
That seems to me to flow better.
Regards,
Bill Herrin
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William Herrin
[email protected]
https://bill.herrin.us/
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