On Thu, Mar 1, 2018 at 3:10 PM, Gaelan Steele <g...@canishe.com> wrote:
> I create the following proposal; keeping it in the Pool in case of final 
> feedback.
>
> Title: PAoaM Patch
> AI: 3
> Authors: Gaelan, Trigon
>
> —
> In Rule 105 “Rule Changes,” replace "If the reenacting proposal provides new 
> text for the rule, the rule must have materially the same purpose as did the 
> repealed version; otherwise, the attempt to reenact the rule is null and 
> void.” with “If the reenacting proposal provides new text for the rule, the 
> rule SHOULD have materially the same purpose as did the repealed version."
>
> The Rulekeepor MAY list historical annotations for changes made by the 
> following portion of this proposal (until the text “END CLEANUP”) however e 
> wishes, including incorrectly or not at all.
> If rule 2599 is not currently enacted, re-enact it with the following text; 
> if it is enacted but does not have the following text, amend it to have the 
> following text: {
> If a player has not received a Welcome Package since e most
> recently registered, any player CAN cause em to receive one by
> announcement.
>
> When a player receives a Welcome Package, Agora creates the
> following assets in eir possession:
>
> 1. 10 coins
> 2. 5 lumber
> 3. 5 stones
> 4. 10 apples
> 5. 3 papers
> }
>
> If no rule titled “Paydays” exists, create it at power 2 with the following 
> text; if it exists but does not have the following text, amend it to have the 
> following text: {
> Whenever a Payday occurs, the following events happen in order:
>
> 1. The following assets are created in the possession of each
>    player:
>    A. 10 coins
>    B. 5 apples
>    C. 2 papers
>
> 2. For each office, if a single player held that office for 16 or
>    more days in the previous month and e was not issued any Cards
>    other than Green for eir conduct in that office during that
>    time, the following assets are created in the possession of
>    that player:
>    A. 5 coins
>    B. 1 corn
>
> The occurrence of Paydays is secured.  At the beginning of each
> month, a Payday occurs.
> }
>
> If Rule 1993 is not currently enacted, re-enact it with the following text; 
> if it is enacted but does not have the following text, amend it to have the 
> following text: {
> Arcadia is a land entirely defined by the Arcadian Map (the Map).
> The Map is the term for the set of all Land Units.
>
> The Map divides Arcadia into a finite, discrete number of Units of
> Land, or simply Land. Each Unit of Land is an indestructible asset
> specified by an ordered pair of integers known as its Latitude and
> Longitude.
>
> Every unique ordered pair of integers within the limits defined in
> the Rules for Latitude and Longitude signifies an existent Unit of
> Land. No other Units of Land exist. Units of Land CAN only be
> created or destroyed by changing the limits of Latitude and
> Longitude defined in the Rules.
>
> All values for Latitude and Longitude MUST lie between -6 and +6,
> inclusive.
>
> The Total Land Area of Arcadia is the number of existent Units of
> Land defined by permissible Latitude and Longitude pairs.
> }
>
> If Rule 1994 is not currently enacted, re-enact it with the following text; 
> if it is enacted but does not have the following text, amend it to have the 
> following text: {
> Any existent Land for which ownership has not been explicitly
> changed belongs to Agora.
>
> Land belonging to Agora is called Public Land. Land belonging to
> a contract is called Communal Land. Land belonging to any other
> entity is called Private Land. Together, Communal Land and Private
> Land are called Proprietary Land.
> }
>
> If Rule 1995 is not currently enacted, re-enact it with the following text; 
> if it is enacted but does not have the following text, amend it to have the 
> following text: {
> Each Unit of Land has a Land Type switch, tracked by the
> Cartographor, whose values are "Black", "White", and "Aether" (the
> default). Changes to Land Type switches are secured. To "change
> the type" of, or to "transform" a Unit of Land is to flip its Type
> switch. A “Unit of X” is a Unit of Land whose Land Type switch has
> the value X.
>
> When existent Land has not had its Type changed as explicitly
> permitted by the Rules, or has a Type that is not currently
> defined by the Rules, it is considered to have the Land Type of
> Aether. Rules to the contrary nonwithstanding, Units of Aether
> CANNOT be transferred from Agora, or owned by any entity other
> than Agora.
>
> If Proprietary Land becomes Aether, the Cartographor SHALL
> transfer it to Agora in a timely fashion, destroy any facilities
> on the Land Unit, and set all other switches to their default
> values.
>
> Type is a singleton switch with the values of Black and White,
> defaulting to Black. When an act specifies that an alternating
> land type is to be used, the current value of the Alternating Land
> Type switch is used, and the switch is set to the next value of
> the switch.
> }
>
> If Rule 1996 is not currently enacted, re-enact it with the following text; 
> if it is enacted but does not have the following text, amend it to have the 
> following text: {
> The Cartographor is an office; its holder is recordkeepor for the
> Land of Arcadia.
>
> The Cartographor's Weekly Report shall include:
>
> 1. the ownership and land type of all existing land;
> 2. all changes in the ownership and land type of existing land
>    since the most recent report;
> 3. the location for the previous week and the current week of each
>    entity with a defined location;
> 4. the next alternating land type;
> 5. all facilities and their parent land units; and
> 6. a list of all preserved land units.
> }
>
> If Rule 1996 is not titled “The Cartographor”, retitle it “The Cartographor”.
>
> If Rule 1998 is not currently enacted, re-enact it with the following text; 
> if it is enacted but does not have the following text, amend it to have the 
> following text: {
> Two Units of Land are Adjacent if they have the same Latitude, and
> their Longitudes differ by exactly one; or they have the same
> Longitude, and their Latitudes differ by exactly one.
>
> Land Unit A is said to be connected to Land Unit B if it is
> possible to reach B by moving only to adjacent Land Units of the
> same color, starting from A.
> }
>
> If Rule 1999 is not currently enacted, re-enact it with the following text; 
> if it is enacted but does not have the following text, amend it to have the 
> following text: {
> Location is a player switch, tracked by the Cartographer, whose
> values are ordered pairs of integers where the first value is a
> valid Latitude, and the second is a valid Longitude. The default
> Location is (0, 0).
>
> To "move" a player is to flip that player’s Location switch to the
> Latitude and Longitude of the destination.
>
> No other Entity can have a location unless it is defined in a rule
> other than this one. Changes to the Location of an Entity are
> secured. If an Entity is specified by this Rule as having a
> defined Location, but its Location has not been explicitly set or
> changed, its Location is set to (0, 0).
> }
>
> If Rule 2003 is not currently enacted, re-enact it with the following text; 
> if it is enacted but does not have the following text, amend it to have the 
> following text: {
> Players CAN destroy:
>
> 1. 1 apple to move from one Land Unit to an adjacent Unit if their
>    Land Types are the same and the destination is not Aether;
>
> 2. 2 apples to move from one Land Unit to an adjacent Unit if
>    their Land Types differ and the destination is not Aether;
>
> 3. 2 apples to set Land Type of a Land Unit which e owns to any
>    Land Type other than Aether, whether or not e is located at
>    that Land Unit.
>
> 4. 3 apples to set the Land Type of a Land Unit that is adjacent
>    to the Entity's current location, is of type Aether, and is
>    owned by Agora, to an alternating Land Type.
>
> 5. 4 apples to set the Land Type of a Land Unit that is adjacent
>    to the Entity's current location, is of type Aether, and is
>    owned by Agora, to a Land Type of eir choice.
>
> 6. 6 apples to set the Land Type of a Land Unit that is of type
>    Aether, and is owned by Agora, to an alternating Land Type.
>
> Players CAN, while performing the above actions, substitute 3
> apples for 1 corn.
> }
>
> If rule 2004 is not currently enacted, re-enact it with the following text; 
> if it is enacted but does not have the following text, amend it to have the 
> following text: {
> Every Agoran Week, if the number of units of Private Land is less
> than one half the total number of units of Land, an auction SHALL
> be initiated. For this auction, the announcer is the Cartographor,
> the auctioneer is the Cartographor, the lots are chosen as such:
>
> 1. if there exist at least 5 Units of non-Aether Land in the
>    possession of Agora with the preservation switch set to False:
>    any 5 such Units of Land, to be chosen by the Cartographor,
>    each Land Unit in a separate lot;
>
> 2. if there exist fewer than 5 Units of non-Aether Land in the
>    possession of Agora: all such Units, each land unit in a
>    separate lot;
>
> and the minimum bid is 1 coin.
> }
>
> If Rule 2022 is not currently enacted, re-enact it with the following text; 
> if it is enacted but does not have the following text, amend it to have the 
> following text: {
> During the second Eastman week of each Agoran Month, the
> Cartographor SHALL perform the following actions in sequence, and
> report these changes:
>
> 1. Every Land Unit, with a preservation switch of False
>    that is not directly connected to a unit of Aether, or is not
>    connected by its own type to a unit of Aether, shall be
>    transformed to Aether.
>
> 2. Any entities whose locations are on land units so transformed
>    shall have their locations set to (0, 0).
>
> 3. If any land unit so transformed is not property of Agora, it
>    becomes property of Agora.
> }
>
> If Rule 2022 is not titled “Land Transfiguration”, retitle it “Land 
> Transfiguration”.
>
> END CLEANUP
>
> Amend rule 2166 by replacing “shiny” with “unit of Agora’s official currency” 
> in both instances.
>
> Amend rule 1995 by replacing “all other switches” with “all other switches on 
> the Land Unit”.
>
> Amend Rule 2004 “Land Auctions” by replacing "the auctioneer is the 
> Cartographor” with "the auctioneer is the Agora”.
>
> Amend the rule titled “Facilities” by making the following changes: {
> Replace the last paragraph with "Facilities always have the same owner as 
> their parent land unit. If the owner of a facility is ever not the same as 
> that of its parent land unit, it is transferred to the owner of its parent 
> land unit.”
> Append the following to the second paragraph: “Facilities on private land can 
> be destroyed by the owner by announcement. Facilities on communal land can be 
> destroyed by the owning contract by announcement. Facilities on public land 
> can be destroyed Without Objection.”
> }
>
> Amend rule 2022 “Land Transfiguration” by replacing the first paragraph with 
> “Once during the second or third Eastman weeks of each Agoran Month, the 
> Cartographor CAN perform the following actions in sequence, and report these 
> changes:” and by appending “The Cartographor SHALL do so in the second 
> Eastman week of each Agoran Month.” at the end in a new paragraph.
>
>> On Mar 1, 2018, at 10:14 AM, Reuben Staley <reuben.sta...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>> Other things we need to do:
>>
>> Make Agora the auctioneer for Land Auctions.
>>
>> Remove the last paragraph of the Facilities rule and replace it with
>> "Facilities always have the same owner as their parent land unit" or
>> smth.
>>
>> Add a destruction clause to the Facilities rule. Also maybe a
>> rank-down the facilities clause.
>>
>> Also, the Land Transfiguration rule may be a bit broken. Make it say
>> "At the beginning of the second Eastman week of each month, the
>> following actions occur. The Cartographor SHALL report these changes
>> in a timely fashion."
>>
>> On Wed, Feb 28, 2018 at 8:23 AM, Gaelan Steele <g...@canishe.com> wrote:
>>> This doesn’t need to be 3.1, just 3. Oops.
>>>
>>>> On Feb 28, 2018, at 7:19 AM, Gaelan Steele <g...@canishe.com> wrote:
>>>>
>>>> Title: PAoaM Patch
>>>> AI: 3.1
>>>>
>>>> —
>>>>
>>>> Remove the sentence "If the reenacting proposal provides new text for the
>>>> rule, the rule must have materially the same purpose as did the
>>>> repealed version; otherwise, the attempt to reenact the rule is
>>>> null and void.” from Rule 105 “Rule Changes.”
>>>>
>>>> If rule 2599 is not currently enacted, re-enact it with the following 
>>>> text; if it is enacted but does not have the following text, amend it to 
>>>> have the following text: {
>>>> If a player has not received a Welcome Package since e most
>>>> recently registered, any player CAN cause em to receive one by
>>>> announcement.
>>>>
>>>> When a player receives a Welcome Package, Agora creates the
>>>> following assets in eir possession:
>>>>
>>>> 1. 10 coins
>>>> 2. 5 lumber
>>>> 3. 5 stones
>>>> 4. 10 apples
>>>> 5. 3 papers
>>>> }
>>>>
>>>> If no rule titled “Paydays” exists, create it at power 2 with the 
>>>> following text; if it exists but does not have the following text, amend 
>>>> it to have the following text: {
>>>> Whenever a Payday occurs, the following events happen in order:
>>>>
>>>> 1. The following assets are created in the possession of each
>>>>    player:
>>>>    A. 10 coins
>>>>    B. 5 apples
>>>>    C. 2 papers
>>>>
>>>> 2. For each office, if a single player held that office for 16 or
>>>>    more days in the previous month and e was not issued any Cards
>>>>    other than Green for eir conduct in that office during that
>>>>    time, the following assets are created in the possession of
>>>>    that player:
>>>>    A. 5 coins
>>>>    B. 1 corn
>>>>
>>>> The occurrence of Paydays is secured.  At the beginning of each
>>>> month, a Payday occurs.
>>>> }
>>>>
>>>> If Rule 1993 is not currently enacted, re-enact it with the following 
>>>> text; if it is enacted but does not have the following text, amend it to 
>>>> have the following text: {
>>>> Arcadia is a land entirely defined by the Arcadian Map (the Map).
>>>> The Map is the term for the set of all Land Units.
>>>>
>>>> The Map divides Arcadia into a finite, discrete number of Units of
>>>> Land, or simply Land. Each Unit of Land is an indestructible asset
>>>> specified by an ordered pair of integers known as its Latitude and
>>>> Longitude.
>>>>
>>>> Every unique ordered pair of integers within the limits defined in
>>>> the Rules for Latitude and Longitude signifies an existent Unit of
>>>> Land. No other Units of Land exist. Units of Land CAN only be
>>>> created or destroyed by changing the limits of Latitude and
>>>> Longitude defined in the Rules.
>>>>
>>>> All values for Latitude and Longitude MUST lie between -6 and +6,
>>>> inclusive.
>>>>
>>>> The Total Land Area of Arcadia is the number of existent Units of
>>>> Land defined by permissible Latitude and Longitude pairs.
>>>> }
>>>>
>>>> If Rule 1994 is not currently enacted, re-enact it with the following 
>>>> text; if it is enacted but does not have the following text, amend it to 
>>>> have the following text: {
>>>> Any existent Land for which ownership has not been explicitly
>>>> changed belongs to Agora.
>>>>
>>>> Land belonging to Agora is called Public Land. Land belonging to
>>>> a contract is called Communal Land. Land belonging to any other
>>>> entity is called Private Land. Together, Communal Land and Private
>>>> Land are called Proprietary Land.
>>>> }
>>>>
>>>> If Rule 1995 is not currently enacted, re-enact it with the following 
>>>> text; if it is enacted but does not have the following text, amend it to 
>>>> have the following text: {
>>>> Each Unit of Land has a Land Type switch, tracked by the
>>>> Cartographor, whose values are "Black", "White", and "Aether" (the
>>>> default). Changes to Land Type switches are secured. To "change
>>>> the type" of, or to "transform" a Unit of Land is to flip its Type
>>>> switch. A “Unit of X” is a Unit of Land whose Land Type switch has
>>>> the value X.
>>>>
>>>> When existent Land has not had its Type changed as explicitly
>>>> permitted by the Rules, or has a Type that is not currently
>>>> defined by the Rules, it is considered to have the Land Type of
>>>> Aether. Rules to the contrary nonwithstanding, Units of Aether
>>>> CANNOT be transferred from Agora, or owned by any entity other
>>>> than Agora.
>>>>
>>>> If Proprietary Land becomes Aether, the Cartographor SHALL
>>>> transfer it to Agora in a timely fashion, destroy any facilities
>>>> on the Land Unit, and set all other switches to their default
>>>> values.
>>>>
>>>> Type is a singleton switch with the values of Black and White,
>>>> defaulting to Black. When an act specifies that an alternating
>>>> land type is to be used, the current value of the Alternating Land
>>>> Type switch is used, and the switch is set to the next value of
>>>> the switch.
>>>> }
>>>>
>>>> If Rule 1996 is not currently enacted, re-enact it with the following 
>>>> text; if it is enacted but does not have the following text, amend it to 
>>>> have the following text: {
>>>> The Cartographor is an office; its holder is recordkeepor for the
>>>> Land of Arcadia.
>>>>
>>>> The Cartographor's Weekly Report shall include:
>>>>
>>>> 1. the ownership and land type of all existing land;
>>>> 2. all changes in the ownership and land type of existing land
>>>>    since the most recent report;
>>>> 3. the location for the previous week and the current week of each
>>>>    entity with a defined location;
>>>> 4. the next alternating land type;
>>>> 5. all facilities and their parent land units; and
>>>> 6. a list of all preserved land units.
>>>> }
>>>>
>>>> If Rule 1996 is not titled “The Cartographor”, retitle it “The 
>>>> Cartographor”.
>>>>
>>>> If Rule 1998 is not currently enacted, re-enact it with the following 
>>>> text; if it is enacted but does not have the following text, amend it to 
>>>> have the following text: {
>>>> Two Units of Land are Adjacent if they have the same Latitude, and
>>>> their Longitudes differ by exactly one; or they have the same
>>>> Longitude, and their Latitudes differ by exactly one.
>>>>
>>>> Land Unit A is said to be connected to Land Unit B if it is
>>>> possible to reach B by moving only to adjacent Land Units of the
>>>> same color, starting from A.
>>>> }
>>>>
>>>> If Rule 1999 is not currently enacted, re-enact it with the following 
>>>> text; if it is enacted but does not have the following text, amend it to 
>>>> have the following text: {
>>>> Location is a player switch, tracked by the Cartographer, whose
>>>> values are ordered pairs of integers where the first value is a
>>>> valid Latitude, and the second is a valid Longitude. The default
>>>> Location is (0, 0).
>>>>
>>>> To "move" a player is to flip that player’s Location switch to the
>>>> Latitude and Longitude of the destination.
>>>>
>>>> No other Entity can have a location unless it is defined in a rule
>>>> other than this one. Changes to the Location of an Entity are
>>>> secured. If an Entity is specified by this Rule as having a
>>>> defined Location, but its Location has not been explicitly set or
>>>> changed, its Location is set to (0, 0).
>>>> }
>>>>
>>>> If Rule 2003 is not currently enacted, re-enact it with the following 
>>>> text; if it is enacted but does not have the following text, amend it to 
>>>> have the following text: {
>>>> Players CAN destroy:
>>>>
>>>> 1. 1 apple to move from one Land Unit to an adjacent Unit if their
>>>>    Land Types are the same and the destination is not Aether;
>>>>
>>>> 2. 2 apples to move from one Land Unit to an adjacent Unit if
>>>>    their Land Types differ and the destination is not Aether;
>>>>
>>>> 3. 2 apples to set Land Type of a Land Unit which e owns to any
>>>>    Land Type other than Aether, whether or not e is located at
>>>>    that Land Unit.
>>>>
>>>> 4. 3 apples to set the Land Type of a Land Unit that is adjacent
>>>>    to the Entity's current location, is of type Aether, and is
>>>>    owned by Agora, to an alternating Land Type.
>>>>
>>>> 5. 4 apples to set the Land Type of a Land Unit that is adjacent
>>>>    to the Entity's current location, is of type Aether, and is
>>>>    owned by Agora, to a Land Type of eir choice.
>>>>
>>>> 6. 6 apples to set the Land Type of a Land Unit that is of type
>>>>    Aether, and is owned by Agora, to an alternating Land Type.
>>>>
>>>> Players CAN, while performing the above actions, substitute 3
>>>> apples for 1 corn.
>>>> }
>>>>
>>>> If rule 2004 is not currently enacted, re-enact it with the following 
>>>> text; if it is enacted but does not have the following text, amend it to 
>>>> have the following text: {
>>>> Every Agoran Week, if the number of units of Private Land is less
>>>> than one half the total number of units of Land, an auction SHALL
>>>> be initiated. For this auction, the announcer is the Cartographor,
>>>> the auctioneer is the Cartographor, the lots are chosen as such:
>>>>
>>>> 1. if there exist at least 5 Units of non-Aether Land in the
>>>>    possession of Agora with the preservation switch set to False:
>>>>    any 5 such Units of Land, to be chosen by the Cartographor,
>>>>    each Land Unit in a separate lot;
>>>>
>>>> 2. if there exist fewer than 5 Units of non-Aether Land in the
>>>>    possession of Agora: all such Units, each land unit in a
>>>>    separate lot;
>>>>
>>>> and the minimum bid is 1 coin.
>>>> }
>>>>
>>>> If Rule 2022 is not currently enacted, re-enact it with the following 
>>>> text; if it is enacted but does not have the following text, amend it to 
>>>> have the following text: {
>>>> During the second Eastman week of each Agoran Month, the
>>>> Cartographor SHALL perform the following actions in sequence, and
>>>> report these changes:
>>>>
>>>> 1. Every Land Unit, with a preservation switch of False
>>>>    that is not directly connected to a unit of Aether, or is not
>>>>    connected by its own type to a unit of Aether, shall be
>>>>    transformed to Aether.
>>>>
>>>> 2. Any entities whose locations are on land units so transformed
>>>>    shall have their locations set to (0, 0).
>>>>
>>>> 3. If any land unit so transformed is not property of Agora, it
>>>>    becomes property of Agora.
>>>> }
>>>>
>>>> If Rule 2022 is not titled “Land Transfiguration”, retitle it “Land 
>>>> Transfiguration”.
>>>>
>>>> Amend rule 2166 by replacing “shiny” with “unit of Agora’s official 
>>>> currency” in both instances.
>>>>
>>>> Amend rule 1995 by replacing “all other switches” with “all other switches 
>>>> on the Land Unit.”

Still missing the related bug (it should be "CAN and SHALL"), and
someone with more time than I have ATM should check to see if there
are any other SHALL/CAN mixups (if there's one, there's usually more
than one).

-Aris

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