On Sun, Oct 29, 2017 at 5:18 PM, ATMunn <iamingodsa...@gmail.com> wrote: > Thanks for this, Aris. Comments on your comments below.
Sorry for not getting back to you sooner, and thank you for looking at my comments. >>> If the contract that made one of its parties an Auctioneer of an >>> auction does not permit that player to specify certain parts of an >>> auction >>> by eir own free will, and instead as described by the auction, e SHALL >>> NOT >>> specify those parts otherwise. >> >> >> What does this mean? > > basically "if a contract says that these things have to be this way for this > auction, you can't just make them different when you announce the auction" > I really don't like this sentence though, it's a super messy way of doing > it. How is "A contractual auction can only be initiated as described by the contract that permitted it", or something more in that style? You could make it apply to rules too, actually. >>> >>> # Bidding >>> >>> Once an auction is initiated, any player CAN bid on the auction. >> >> >> CAN by announcement. Also, how? > > What do you mean by how? By announcement kind of answers that question. "I bid on this auction" doesn't really do much good. You want something like "by an announcement specifying the amount e bids". You might want to consider making this a notice, like a ballot or notice of honor. >> >> This section is confusing and over-complicated. Why not just CAN? >> Haven't you already said that no bids can be placed after the end of >> an auction? > > I agree. It is confusing, and probably over-complicated too. What do you > mean by "Why not just CAN"? Do you mean get rid of the "without 2 > objections"? > That was mainly put in there so the Auctioneer had a chance to get the items > before the auction just ended on em. It might not be necessary though. Yeah, that was what I meant. If it's just to add a delay, with notice would be better. -Aris
