I know that I for one read over it and liked the idea and wasn't sure whether it was would work as is, but didn't have thoughts on how to improve it, therefore I didn't comment. I'm sorry that I wasn't very helpful, but I don't have ideas on how I could be.

On 10/15/2017 08:35 PM, ATMunn . wrote:
Hopefully this doesn't sound like I'm begging for attention or something, but this seems to have been ignored. I don't mind that much, I'd just like to know what stuff needs improvement. Have people just not noticed it yet, does it really not have much wrong with it, or am I just too impatient?

On Sat, Oct 14, 2017 at 9:55 PM, ATMunn . <iamingodsa...@gmail.com <mailto:iamingodsa...@gmail.com>> wrote:

    Okay, the second draft is finished. I've changed a bunch of stuff,
    it's almost a completely different proposal now. I've taken into
    consideration almost everything Aris and Alexis mentioned, so I've
    given them co-authorship as well.
    I'm sure it's still got plenty of flaws. But it should be better.
    I'm just going to post this and go to bed now. I'll see what
    people think in the morning.

    Title: "A Reward for Obedience v2"
    Author: ATMunn
    Co-Author(s): Aris, Alexis
    AI: 1

    Create a new power-1 rule titled "Medals of Honour"
    {
        Medals of Honour are a destructible fixed currency tracked by
    the Herald.

        [One note on this section here: I don't know whether or not
    it's implied that players should be able to, by some means or
    another, challenge whether or not a player is eligible if e
    believes it is invalid.]
        In the first week of an Agoran Month, any player CAN declare
    emself to be eligible for a Medal of Honour by announcement if all
    of the following are true:
        * E has made at least 1 message to a public forum in the last
    Agoran month.
        [I really don't like having to include this, but if I don't
    then players that literally do nothing can be eligible for Medals
    of Honour.]
        * E does not have negative Karma.
        * In the last Agoran month, e has not had a Card issued to em.
        [I'm not exactly sure how to word the broken pledge thing, so
    I've left it out for now.]

        [I've never written a rule containing an Agoran Decision
    before, so I'm sure there's lots of flaws in this. I mainly copied
    stuff from various places in the rules.]
        In the second week of an Agoran Month, if there are any
    players who are eligible for a Medal of Honour, the Herald CAN, by
    announcement, and SHALL in a timely fashion, initiate an Agoran
    Decision on who is to be awarded a Medal of Honour.
        For this decision, the valid votes are all players who are
    eligible for a Medal of Honour, the vote collector is the Herald,
    and the voting method is instant-runoff.
        Upon the resolution of this decision, its outcome is awarded a
    Medal of Honour.

        If, at any time, any player has 6 or more Medals of Honour,
    and e has not won via this rule previously, e can win the game by
    announcement, destroying all of eir Medals of Honour.
    }

    On Sat, Oct 14, 2017 at 9:18 PM, ATMunn . <iamingodsa...@gmail.com
    <mailto:iamingodsa...@gmail.com>> wrote:

        Thanks, both of you, for your suggestions. I'm working on a
        revised version at the moment. One idea I had, regarding what
        Alexis said about the idea of players declaring themselves
        eligible for a Badge of Honor, (now Medal of Honour) is the
        idea of the recordkeepor initiating an Agoran Decision on who
        will get the medal. All players who declared themselves
        eligible for a medal at the time of the initiation of the
        Agoran Decision would be the possible votes. This would ease
        the load on the recordkeepor even more, as e would only have
        to worry about initiating and resolving the election.

        On Sat, Oct 14, 2017 at 7:09 PM, Aris Merchant
        <thoughtsoflifeandligh...@gmail.com
        <mailto:thoughtsoflifeandligh...@gmail.com>> wrote:

            On Sat, Oct 14, 2017 at 8:50 AM, ATMunn .
            <iamingodsa...@gmail.com <mailto:iamingodsa...@gmail.com>>
            wrote:
            > Title: A Reward for Obedience
            > Author: ATMunn
            > Co-Author(s):
            > AI: 1
            >
            > Create a new power-1 rule titled "Badges of Honor"
            > {
            >     Badges of Honor are an indestructible, player-owned
            asset. The Referee
            > is the recordkeepor for Badges of Honor.

            I'd go with "Badges of Honor are a destructible fixed
            currency tracked
            by the Referee" (which would make the holder restriction
            unnecessary),
            or, if you want them to be transferable "Badges of Honor
            are a liquid
            currency tracked by the Referee. Ownership of Badges of
            Honor is
            restricted to players".

            I have three further comments.  First, this might be
            something best
            tracked by the Herald (maybe even the Tailor, as ribbons
            work on a
            similar basis), who deals with matters of honor. E would
            have to check
            the Referee's report, but right now the Referee has to
            check the
            Herald's report, so there's really no change. Second, you
            should
            probably change it not to have "badge" in the name, as
            badges are
            already defined by Rule 2415. Third, you could consider
            having persons
            be able to own them. If that was true, but gaining one was
            restricted
            to players, the effect would be that a person who
            deregisters and
            reregisters would get to keep eir badge count, the same
            way it is for
            ribbons.

            -Aris





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